Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix tense and article errors (use past tense 'spent', remove duplicate words). Use a linking word if adding detail (e.g., 'because' or 'and').

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I spent many afternoons there playing with my school friends. For example, we used to play hide-and-seek under the big oak tree, and those memories still make me smile.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and correct small grammar issues ('the parks' → 'parks', 'find beneficial' → 'find it beneficial', 'explore the nature' → 'explore nature'). Keep it to two or three sentences and use a linking word ('but' is fine). Add a specific example about frequency or activities to strengthen the answer.

Ejemplo: I still enjoy going to parks, but I have less free time than I did as a child. However, I make time on weekends to walk my dog and explore nature, which helps me relax and keeps my dog happy.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with a specific reason. Fix grammar and phrasing: 'with developing of urban cities' → 'with urban development', 'is lots a lot more harder' → 'it is becoming much harder'. Limit to two sentences and use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and offer places to relax. However, with rapid urban development, it is becoming much harder to set aside land for parks.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct tense: 'I have always dreamed of visiting Central Park.' Avoid awkward phrases ('stayed until these days') and incomplete endings. Add one specific reason and a short example of what you would do there. Keep it to two sentences.

Ejemplo: I have always dreamed of visiting Central Park in New York. I want to walk its famous trails and see landmarks like the Bethesda Fountain because I love large urban parks that combine nature with city views.

× 'I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child because I spend so many so much time and created memories with my with my old friends that I can remember even until these days.'

✓ 'I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child because I spent so much time and created memories with my old friends that I can still remember.'

'Singular and plural issue' applies to 'so many so much time' where 'time' is uncountable and should use 'so much' not 'so many'. Also tense consistency required 'spend' should be past 'spent' to match 'enjoyed' and 'created'. Removed duplicate 'with my' and replaced 'even until these days' with 'still remember' for naturalness and correct use of adverbial phrase.

× 'Uh, nowadays I have less time than I had when I was a kid, but still I love going to the parks and I find beneficial to go there, explore the nature and I have my pet dog which is very happy when we go to the park.'

✓ 'Uh, nowadays I have less time than I did when I was a kid, but I still love going to parks and I find it beneficial to go there, explore nature, and my pet dog is very happy when we go.'

'Past tense issue' : compare past with past 'had' vs 'did' — use 'did' for the action 'have less time than I did'. 'There is' and cleft construction issue fixed by adding 'it' before 'beneficial' (Grammar problem type 3/22 style) but within allowed list treated as past tense correction. Also removed unnecessary definite article before 'parks' and 'nature', and improved clause about the dog to use a simple present 'my pet dog is' for clarity.

× 'I would love to see more parks and more green spaces in my city, but with developing of urban cities nowadays is lots a lot more harder to see parks and it will be even more harder in upcoming future.'

✓ 'I would love to see more parks and green spaces in my city, but with urban development nowadays it is much harder to find parks, and it will be even harder in the future.'

'Article errors' and general sentence structure: removed redundant 'more' before 'green spaces' and corrected 'with developing of urban cities' to 'with urban development'. Replaced 'is lots a lot more harder' with 'it is much harder' (comparative form 'harder' should be modified by 'much', not doubled). Removed 'upcoming' before 'future' as redundant.

× 'Since I was a child, I had dreamed to visit the Central Park in New York, and that wish stayed until these days right now.'

✓ 'Since I was a child, I have dreamed of visiting Central Park in New York, and that wish has remained until now.'

'Past tense issue': 'had dreamed' suggests a past perfect not needed; use present perfect 'have dreamed' to show a wish continuing to the present. Also 'dreamed to visit' should be 'dreamed of visiting' (verb + preposition), and 'the Central Park' should be 'Central Park' (article error). Replaced 'stayed until these days right now' with 'has remained until now' for grammaticality and clarity.

× 'So yes, my biggest wish is to visit Central Park because it's located in the heart of the city and has different trails so I can actually.'

✓ 'So yes, my biggest wish is to visit Central Park because it is located in the heart of the city and has different trails so I can actually explore them.'

'Sentence structure errors': original sentence ends incomplete ('so I can actually.'). Added 'explore them' to complete the thought and match the intended meaning. Replaced contraction 'it's' with 'it is' for clarity (optional), and ensured pronoun 'them' refers to 'trails' for coherence.