Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct tense and articles. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct past tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g. 'when I was a child', 'I didn't like').

Ejemplo: Not really. When I was a child I didn’t enjoy parks because I preferred indoor activities. For example, I spent most of my free time playing video games and swimming at Al Ahmadi Club, so I rarely went to parks.

Sugerencia: Give a clear main sentence and use comparative language correctly. Use linking words (e.g. 'because,' 'for example') and correct grammar ('there are', 'more facilities', 'than before'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Parks are much better now than they were when I was younger because they have more facilities. For example, there are bathrooms and barbecue areas, which makes visits more comfortable and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clarify your meaning. If you mean you have visited all local parks, say so and then explain why more parks or parks in other areas would be desirable. Use accurate place names and grammar (e.g. 'I have visited all the parks in my city').

Ejemplo: I have visited most of the parks in my city, but I would like to see more parks overall. For example, I hope new parks will be built in areas such as Al Jahra and Jabal Ali to give residents more green space and leisure options.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Start with a clear statement of intention, then give reasons or details (location, features). Use future timing correctly ('one day' or 'in the near future').

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Expo City Dubai to see its parks, especially the Equaventure Park. It is one of the largest adventure parks in the UAE, and I want to try its attractions and activities in the near future.

× No, I didn't because when I was child I don't like playing in the park.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a child I didn't like playing in the park.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The speaker refers to a past time 'when I was a child', so the verbs should be in the past: 'didn't like' not 'don't like'. Also the noun phrase needs the article 'a' before 'child'. Use consistent past tense for actions in the past and include the indefinite article: 'when I was a child I didn't like...'. Suggestions: use past simple for past habits and add necessary articles.

× I just like it to play in video games and in the swimming pool and Al Ahmadi Club.

✓ I just liked playing video games and going to the swimming pool and Al Ahmadi Club.

The original uses an incorrect structure 'like it to play' and inconsistent prepositions. After 'like' use the -ing form for preferences: 'liked playing'. Use 'going to' with locations (swimming pool, club). Also maintain past tense to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestions: use 'like/loved + -ing' for activities and 'go/going to' for places.

× Yes, I do. Now is different than in the past.

✓ Yes, I do. Now it is different from the past.

Use the dummy subject 'it' with 'is different'. Also prefer the preposition 'different from' (or 'to' in some dialects) rather than 'different than'. Maintain present tense 'it is' for current situations. Suggestions: include 'it' as the subject and use 'different from'.

× Now the park is moderate and there is a lot of thing in the park, a lot of facility such as bathroom, barbecue area and that's why I like it than before.

✓ Now the park is better and there are a lot of things in the park, many facilities such as bathrooms and a barbecue area, and that's why I like it more than before.

Use plural forms: 'a lot of things', 'many facilities', and plural nouns 'bathrooms'. 'Moderate' is awkward; 'better' fits contrast with past. Use 'there are' for plural nouns. Use 'like it more than before' rather than 'like it than before'. Suggestions: match quantifiers to countable nouns, pluralise appropriately, and use comparative 'more'.

× Actually I see all the park in my city but I wish to see a lot of park and different city like Al Jahara city and Jabal Ali city in Kuwait.

✓ Actually I have seen all the parks in my city but I wish to see many parks and different cities like Al Jahara and Jabal Ali in Kuwait.

Use present perfect 'have seen' to indicate experience up to now. Plural forms required: 'parks', 'many parks', 'cities'. Do not repeat 'city' after proper names. Use 'many' for countable plural quantity. Suggestions: use correct tense for experiences, plural nouns for multiple places, and concise place names.

× Yes, I wish to visit Dubai, uh, the park's name uh, Equaventure park.

✓ Yes, I wish to visit Dubai, the park's name is Equaventure Park.

The original omits the verb 'is' in the clause naming the park. A full clause requires present simple 'is' to introduce the park's name. Also capitalise proper name 'Park'. Suggestions: include linking verb 'is' when giving names or definitions.

× That's the biggest uh park in the UAE and in the world.

✓ That's the biggest park in the UAE and in the world.

Remove filler 'uh' for clarity; article 'the' before 'biggest park' is correct. No further grammar change needed other than punctuation/pauses. Ensure superlative 'biggest' is followed by the noun. Suggestions: avoid fillers in formal responses and keep the superlative structure 'the biggest park'.

× That's what I wish to visit near day.

✓ That's what I wish to visit one day.

The phrase 'near day' is incorrect. Use 'one day' to express a future desire in idiomatic English. 'Wish to visit' expresses a future intention or desire; 'one day' is the common collocation. Suggestions: use 'one day' to indicate a hoped-for future event.