Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with tense consistency and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct plural/uncountable forms (e.g., “equipment” not “equipments”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. For example, many local parks had colourful flowerbeds and well-maintained playgrounds with swings and slides, so I could play there for hours.

Sugerencia: Use present simple for habitual actions and reduce filler words. Give one clear reason and a specific example, linking them with a connector like “because” or “so”. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Every weekend I go with my daughter because the open space and fresh air help us relax and play together.

Sugerencia: Make conditional sentences accurate and concise. Use correct verb forms for hypothetical situations (e.g., “If new parks were built, I would be happy to visit them”). Provide a short reason and an example of what you would notice or do.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city. If new parks were built, I would visit them to see how their design or facilities differ from existing ones.

Sugerencia: Use clearer verbs (not “impose”) and be specific about which parks or what you want to see. State a concise topic sentence about future plans and add a concrete detail or reason, using a linking word like “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I’d like to visit some famous parks in other cities in China. For example, I hope to see classical garden parks in Suzhou because they have unique landscaping and historic architecture.

× Yes, when I was a child, I like to go to the parks.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked to go to the parks.

This sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the past tense 'liked' is required rather than the present tense 'like'. Use past tense for actions habitually done in the past (e.g., 'When I was a child, I liked to...').

× They are always full of flowers and great grounds, playground and the kinds of swings and games equipments, and I can play them a long time.

✓ They were always full of flowers and had great grounds, playgrounds and many kinds of swings and games, and I could play for a long time.

Multiple issues: tense should match past ('were', 'had', 'could') because speaker speaks about childhood; plural nouns need correct forms ('playgrounds', 'swings'); 'equipments' is uncountable and should be 'equipment' or omitted; 'play them a long time' is incorrect—use 'play for a long time'. Also remove unnecessary articles and reorder for clarity.

× Yeah, till now I still like going to a park.

✓ Yes, even now I still like going to parks.

'Till now' is informal and slightly awkward; use 'even now' or 'still' and keep plural 'parks' to match general preference. Present simple 'like' is correct for current habitual actions, but change 'a park' to 'parks' for generality.

× Uh, uh, every weekends I always go to a park with my daughter 'cause I can feel relaxed and comfortable in the parks always.

✓ Every weekend I always go to a park with my daughter because I feel relaxed and comfortable in parks.

Use singular 'weekend' with 'every'; place adverbs correctly ('always' before main verb or after subject); use 'because' not informal 'cause'; 'can feel' is unnecessary—use 'feel'; remove redundant 'the' before 'parks' for general statement.

× It always uh, makes us very relaxing and enjoyable.

✓ It always makes us feel relaxed and happy.

Use adjectives to describe feelings ('relaxed', 'happy') and the verb 'feel' to link experience. 'Relaxing' and 'enjoyable' describe things, not people, so replace with appropriate adjectives for people.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in our city if there are some.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city if there were any.

Expressing a hypothetical wish about availability uses conditional 'would like' and past subjunctive 'were' (or 'if there are any' for real possibility). Also use 'any' with conditional negative or uncertain existence.

× If I heard some parks were new, newly built, I will be very happy to go to see it if there any difference between the parks.

✓ If I heard that some parks were newly built, I would be very happy to go and see them if there were any differences between the parks.

Use conditional structure consistently: past-tense condition 'If I heard' requires 'would' for result. 'New' and 'newly built' are redundant—use 'newly built'. Match plural 'parks' with 'them'. Use 'differences' plural and include 'that' for clarity. 'If there any' is ungrammatical—use 'if there were any'.

× Yes, I always like to impose the new places, new parks in the other city.

✓ Yes, I always like to explore new places and new parks in other cities.

The verb 'impose' is incorrect here; use 'explore' or 'visit'. Use plural 'other cities' when speaking generally. Combine phrases for natural word order: 'explore new places and parks'.

× In China, you know, there are many parks in the city.

✓ In China, you know, there are many parks in cities.

The phrase 'in the city' implies a single city; to make a general statement about China use plural 'cities'. Present simple is correct for general facts.

× And so in the future I still like to go to see the park.

✓ So in the future I would still like to go and see parks.

For future wishes use 'would like' rather than plain 'like'. Use plural 'parks' for generality and 'go and see' for natural collocation.