Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar and clear sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and plural forms (e.g., 'I loved going to parks with my friends and family').

Ejemplo: Yes — I loved going to parks with my friends and family when I was a child. For example, we often played volleyball and football, and I especially enjoyed shooting hoops because I liked the competition. These visits were a regular and happy part of my weekends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid fillers. Use correct words and link clauses clearly (e.g., 'I don’t have much time to go to parks nowadays, but when I do...'). Provide one specific example of when or with whom you go.

Ejemplo: Not as often as before — I’m very busy with work, so I rarely visit parks during the week. However, I usually go with my family on Sunday mornings, and those visits are relaxing and help me recharge for the week.

Sugerencia: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add one clear reason. Avoid leaving answers incomplete. Use linking words to expand slightly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and family outings. For example, additional neighborhood parks would make it easier for people to go for walks without travelling far.

Sugerencia: Be specific and correct tense usage. State the park name if possible, give a reason and one supporting detail. Avoid repetitions and filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes — I would love to visit Yosemite National Park in California because I’ve seen stunning photos and videos of its waterfalls and granite cliffs. I’m especially keen to hike the trails and see the scenery in person next summer.

× Yeah, I love to go park with my friend and family.

✓ Yeah, I loved going to the park with my friends and family.

Use of preposition and articles: 'go park' is incorrect; the correct pattern is 'go to the park'. Also 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'family' and general meaning. Tense: question asked about childhood, so past tense 'loved going' fits. Combine these changes for natural expression. Suggested practice: learn verb + preposition patterns (go to), article use for specific places (the park), and plural forms for general groups.

× A lot of time I have go on with my friends and enjoy playing more different games like volleyball and playing in a prey garden, football among them.

✓ A lot of the time I used to go out with my friends and enjoy playing various games like volleyball, football, and playing in a playground.

Tense and verb form: 'have go on' is ungrammatical; for past habitual activities use 'used to' or past simple. Prepositions and word choice: 'go on with' should be 'go out with' or 'go to the park with'. 'More different games' is awkward; 'various games' is clearer. 'Prey garden' appears to be a misspelling of 'playground'. Also list items with correct conjunctions and commas. Suggested practice: study past habitual forms (used to), common collocations (go out with, play in a playground), and vocabulary for common recreational places.

× I love to play basketball.

✓ I loved playing basketball.

Tense consistency: the question is about childhood, so past tense 'loved playing' matches. The sentence itself has no article error but needed tense alignment with previous sentences. Suggested practice: ensure tense consistency across answers about the same time frame.

× To be honest, uh, nowadays I have a very busy schedule and I don't get any chance to go apart.

✓ To be honest, nowadays I have a very busy schedule and I don't get any chance to go to parks.

Word choice and preposition: 'go apart' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'go to parks' or 'go out to the park'. Keep present tense 'have' and 'don't get' because this describes current situation. Use plural 'parks' if speaking generally. Suggested practice: review common phrases for visiting places: 'go to the park', 'go out'.

× But yeah, of course, like you go park or sometime with my family and friends and you spend a wonderful time with them.

✓ But yeah, of course, sometimes I go to the park with my family and friends and we spend a wonderful time together.

Preposition and pronoun errors: 'go park' should be 'go to the park'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to mean occasionally. Pronoun and subject-verb: 'you spend' is wrong for referring to the speaker; use 'we spend' and 'together' for natural phrasing. Suggested practice: practice adverbs of frequency (sometimes), correct prepositions (to), and matching subjects with verbs and pronouns.

× I.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

Fragment: 'I.' is an incomplete sentence and provides no information. Based on the question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' a full affirmative response is needed. Use a complete sentence expressing desire or opinion. Suggested practice: avoid sentence fragments; always include subject and verb to form a complete thought.

× Yes, I want to visit a park in California.

✓ Yes, I want to visit a park in California in the future.

Tense and time reference: The question asks about future plans; 'I want to visit' is acceptable but adding 'in the future' clarifies intention. No major grammar error but adding time phrase improves relevance. Suggested practice: when asked about future plans, include time markers or use future forms (I will, I plan to, I hope to).

× Uh, it was very lovely park and I have heard uh, many, many things about it from Internet and uh, I have watched many videos of the dead park and I also like to visit that park 1 is my life.

✓ I've heard many wonderful things about the park on the Internet, and I have watched many videos of that park; I would really like to visit it someday.

Articles and word choice: 'it was very lovely park' needs an article: 'a very lovely park' or rephrased. 'from Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. 'dead park' is incorrect—likely a mistaken word; use 'that park' or the park's name. The clause 'that park 1 is my life' is unintelligible; replace with 'I would really like to visit it someday'. Tense: use present perfect 'I've heard' to indicate experience up to now. Punctuation and sentence structure: combine clauses clearly. Suggested practice: review article use before nouns, prepositions with media (on the Internet), and avoid literal translations or incorrect words; practice expressing desire politely (would like to).