Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (tense and articles) and avoid unnecessary repetitions. Use linking words like 'often' or 'after' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. Often my parents and aunts would take me there after my mother finished work, and we usually finished the outing with a meal at McDonald's.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer then explain with specific reasons and correct phrasing. Avoid vague phrases like 'no accessible parks per town' — instead say 'many towns lack parks' — and use linking words such as 'however' and 'therefore' properly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy parks. However, many towns in the Philippines lack local parks, so I usually visit parks in the capital; when I travel abroad I especially enjoy the well-maintained parks in Japan.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then support with a concise, specific reason. Use correct nouns and pluralization (e.g., 'there are no parks') and link ideas with 'because' or 'since'. Avoid filler words like 'like'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. My town has many shopping malls and supermarkets but very few public parks, so more green spaces would give people places to relax and exercise.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement about future plans, then give a concise, specific reason. Avoid hesitations and finish the thought. Mentioning a cultural reason is fine but link it clearly to your desire to visit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I hope to visit Central Park in New York someday. I feel drawn to it because I watched the sitcom Friends, which often featured scenes in the park, and that made it memorable for me.

× Yes, I did like going to the parks as a child.

✓ Yes, I did like going to parks as a child.

The definite article 'the' before 'parks' implies specific parks already known; in general statements about activities in childhood, plural countable nouns usually omit the article. Remove 'the' to make it a general statement. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Usually I go with my mom and my dad given my aunts, so it is a ritual or a usual thing when my mom goes home after work.

✓ Usually I went with my mom and dad and my aunts, so it was a ritual when my mom came home from work.

The context is past habitual action, so present simple 'go' and present 'is' are incorrect. Use past simple 'went' and 'was'. 'Given my aunts' is incorrect phrase; use 'and my aunts' or 'with my aunts'. 'Come home from work' is the correct collocation in past 'came'. Also remove redundant 'or a usual thing'. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Then we go to McDonald's.

✓ Then we went to McDonald's.

Maintaining past narrative requires past simple 'went' instead of present 'go'. This is primarily a tense issue, but the article and name 'McDonald's' is fine. Use past tense for consistency. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, I still like going to the parks.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks.

For general preferences, omit the definite article before plural 'parks' unless referring to specific parks. Remove 'the'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Right now however, in the Philippines there is no accessible parks per town so usually it is on the metro.

✓ Right now, however, in the Philippines there are no accessible parks in most towns, so parks are usually found in the metro area.

Plural noun 'parks' requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'No accessible parks per town' is awkward; use 'in most towns'. 'It is on the metro' is unclear; rephrase to 'parks are usually found in the metro area'. Commas improve clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So when I go abroad I usually enjoy parks, especially in Japan.

✓ So when I go abroad I usually enjoy visiting parks, especially in Japan.

'Enjoy parks' is acceptable but sounds odd; use 'enjoy visiting parks' to show the activity. No tense change needed. Adding 'visiting' clarifies the verb-object relationship (verb + -ing form required after 'enjoy'). Grammar problem type ID:10

× Yes, I'd really like more parks in the city, especially in my town since most infrastructures in my town are malls.

✓ Yes, I'd really like more parks in the city, especially in my town, since most of the infrastructures here are malls.

Add 'of the' before 'infrastructures' for natural phrasing and a comma for readability. Also 'infrastructures' is usually uncountable 'infrastructure' or refer to 'buildings' or 'structures'. Consider 'most of the infrastructure here consists of malls.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Like there's a bunch of supermarkets but there is no parks for people.

✓ Like there are a bunch of supermarkets, but there are no parks for people.

'There is' with plural 'a bunch of supermarkets' and 'no parks' is incorrect. Use plural verb 'are' for plural nouns. Also better: 'there are a lot of supermarkets but no parks for people.' Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, actually I hope I could go to New York someday and visit Central Park.

✓ Yes, actually I hope I can go to New York someday and visit Central Park.

When expressing hope about a future possibility, use 'can' or 'will be able to' rather than 'could' which is conditional or less certain. 'I hope I can go' is more natural for future plans. Grammar problem type ID:4

× So Central Park is very memorable for me since I really enjoyed the sitcom series friends.

✓ Central Park is very memorable to me because I really enjoyed the sitcom Friends.

Use 'memorable to me' or 'memorable for me' is acceptable but 'to me' is more common. 'Since' can mean 'because' but may be confused with time; use 'because' for clarity. Capitalize the TV show name 'Friends' and drop 'series' or place it correctly: 'the sitcom Friends.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I really love that, uh, comedy series and.

✓ So I really love that comedy series.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends with 'and.' Remove filler 'uh' and the trailing conjunction to form a complete sentence. Keep it concise: 'I really love that comedy series.' Grammar problem type ID:26