Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tense, word order), and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details linked logically (e.g., "because" or "and"). Keep to 2–4 sentences and include specific examples (activities or memories).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I often played games with my brother and sister there. We would climb trees and have picnics, which made me feel free and happy in nature.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct grammar and a brief reason. Use linking words (because/so) properly and avoid filler words. Give one specific detail about why you prefer staying home.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer staying at home now because I enjoy spending time with my cat, and playing with her relaxes me after work.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and use linking words (for example, because/so/therefore). Correct plural and word forms (attractions, interesting). Keep responses concise and avoid repeating the same point.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks because our city has only one small park with few attractions. More parks would offer families places to relax and provide different facilities like playgrounds and walking trails.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear present/future answer and avoid mixing tenses. Mention a specific park or type of park you want to visit and give concrete reasons. Use linking words and correct expressions (e.g., "more space to yourself", "feel close to nature"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the parks I saw in Almaty because they were spacious and very beautiful. I hope to go to a large city park with wide lawns and walking paths so I can relax and feel close to nature.

× Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because there I was played with my brother, sister.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because I used to play there with my brother and sister.

The original uses incorrect past passive 'was played' and wrong word order. Use past habitual 'used to play' or simple past 'played' with correct object order 'with my brother and sister'. This correctly expresses repeated past action. Suggestion: Use 'used to' for habitual past (I used to play) or simple past 'I played there'.

× So in in the parks we can be in a real nature, more confident.

✓ So in parks we can be in real nature and feel more confident.

The phrase 'in a real nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also 'more confident' needs a verb 'feel'. Remove duplicate 'in'. Use 'in parks' or 'in the park' depending on context. Suggestion: Use 'in nature' or 'in the park' and include a verb (feel) before adjectives.

× So because there are a lot of things that makes us happy.

✓ So because there are a lot of things that make us happy.

The relative clause refers to 'things' (plural), so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subject takes plural verb. Suggestion: Match verb number to its subject (things -> make).

× No notice I don't interested in the parks because I just want to stay at home with my cat which makes me happy so I think no.

✓ No, actually I'm not interested in parks because I just want to stay at home with my cat, which makes me happy, so I think not.

Several tense and grammar issues: 'don't interested' is incorrect; use 'I'm not interested' (present continuous/state). 'Notice' is likely misused; 'actually' fits. 'So I think no' is awkward; use 'so I don't' or 'so I think not'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'I'm not interested in parks' or 'I don't like parks' for present preference; place commas to separate clauses.

× Yes, sometimes I like to see more parks in my city because we have just one park and it's not interesting for me because there aren't many things attractions.

✓ Yes, sometimes I would like to see more parks in my city because we have only one park and it's not interesting to me because there aren't many attractions.

Use 'would like' or 'like to see' for preference; 'just one' -> 'only one' is more natural. 'Not interesting for me' should be 'not interesting to me'. 'many things attractions' is wrong word order; use 'many attractions' and drop 'things'. Suggestion: Use correct word order and prepositions: 'interesting to me', 'many attractions'.

× So I just want a new changeable attractions for my city.

✓ So I just want new, varied attractions for my city.

'Changeable attractions' is unnatural; 'varied' or 'new attractions' works. 'a' with plural 'attractions' is incorrect. Remove 'a' and match number. Suggestion: Use adjective 'varied' or 'different' and ensure article matches noun number.

× Yes, of course, when I was in Almaty, there are more opportunities and there are more parks than another city because I went to media and the other parks, they are very beautiful and they're more space to your to yourself and you feel confident in the natural wisdom.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was in Almaty, there were more opportunities and more parks than in other cities because I went to Medeu and other parks; they are very beautiful and there is more space to enjoy by yourself, and you feel confident in nature.

Tense and agreement: speaking about past visit uses past tense 'were' not 'are'. 'Another city' should be 'other cities' and include 'in'. 'Media' likely misheard; 'Medeu' (a park in Almaty) fits better. 'They're more space' is incorrect; use 'there is more space'. 'to your to yourself' is redundant and wrong; use 'to enjoy by yourself'. 'Natural wisdom' is odd; 'in nature' is natural. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense when describing past experiences, correct plurality and prepositions, and choose appropriate nouns (Medeu if intended).