Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., article use, verb forms), and add one specific detail with a linking word. Keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I find photography is the best way to appreciate my surroundings, because it makes me notice small details I would otherwise miss. For example, last weekend I photographed a riverside sunset and later showed the photos to my friends.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct preference, avoid filler phrases and unclear pronouns, and give a specific contrast with linking words (e.g., however, while). Correct awkward phrasing and reduce hesitation for fluency.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference because both urban and rural areas offer attractive views. For example, rural areas are peaceful and full of natural landscapes, while cities offer striking architecture and lively street scenes, so I enjoy photographing both depending on my mood.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your choice, then support it with a specific reason and an example. Fix grammar (use singular/plural correctly and articles) and avoid vague claims. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because it has a long history and diverse landscapes that I haven't fully explored. For instance, I plan to visit ancient towns and mountain regions at home next year before travelling abroad.

× I like taking pictures of different views. I think so it is best way to enjoy our area.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views. I think it is the best way to enjoy our area.

The original has extra word 'so' and is missing the definite article 'the' before 'best way.' Remove 'so' because it is unnecessary and add 'the' for a specific noun phrase: 'the best way.' Also ensure 'think it is' follows correct subject-verb order.

× That's why we can go outside and take photo from different views.

✓ That's why we can go outside and take photos from different views.

The noun 'photo' should be plural when referring to multiple pictures, so use 'photos.' Also 'from different views' is acceptable but 'of different views' is more natural; here I retained 'from' to keep close to the original. Suggestion: use 'take photos of different views.'

× That's all it took. I think both of them can be gorgeous and they can have beautiful views.

✓ I think both urban and rural areas can be gorgeous and can have beautiful views.

'That's all it took' is inappropriate in this context and likely a misuse of an idiom; it should be removed. Also combine the sentences to avoid repetition and improve clarity: specify 'urban and rural areas' rather than 'both of them.' This fixes sentence structure and redundancy.

× Because I'm living in rural areas, maybe, uh, views in urban areas can be interesting for me.

✓ Because I live in a rural area, views in urban areas might be more interesting to me.

Use simple present 'I live' instead of progressive 'I'm living' for a general fact. Use singular 'a rural area' unless speaker means multiple areas. Replace 'can be interesting for me' with 'might be more interesting to me' for natural modal usage and nuance.

× Actually, both of them can be beautiful, but because my country is one of the oldest and biggest country in the world, I'd rather visit it before going other countries.

✓ Actually, both can be beautiful, but because my country is one of the oldest and biggest countries in the world, I'd rather visit it before going to other countries.

When referring to a group, 'countries' should be plural. Also 'one of the ... countries' requires the noun 'countries' in plural. Add 'to' after 'going' when referring to traveling to places: 'going to other countries.' Remove 'of them' to reduce redundancy. Ensure agreement and correct preposition use.