Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct verb forms, and provide one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if you add details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains and beaches when I travel because I like capturing wide landscapes and natural light.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it to at most five sentences and end coherently.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy being surrounded by nature. The greenery and open space calm me, and I find it easier to relax and take photos of landscapes there.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and fluently. Avoid hesitations and repetitions, use linking words to structure supporting details (for example, “for instance” or “also”), and give specific examples of locations or activities to make your answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because India offers a lot of variety. For instance, I can visit the Himalayan foothills for mountain scenery or Kerala for backwaters, and I often take photos there with family or when I travel alone.

× Yes, I like to taking the pictures of different views like mountains, beach, oceans, park, mall and many more pictures.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, like mountains, beaches, oceans, parks, malls and many more.

The verb pattern 'like' is followed by either the infinitive without 'to' (like to take) or the gerund (like taking). The original uses 'to taking', which incorrectly combines 'to' with a gerund. Also, plural forms of countable nouns (beach, park, mall) should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'I like taking pictures' and pluralize the places for generality.

× I want I want to like to click the pictures on different places.

✓ I want to take pictures in different places.

The original repeats 'I want' and mixes 'like to click' awkwardly. 'Click' is informal; 'take pictures' is more natural. Also, 'on different places' should be 'in different places' (preposition correction). Simplify to 'I want to take pictures in different places.'

× I like the rural area because I like the environment and I like and I enjoy enjoying in the land area.

✓ I like rural areas because I enjoy the environment and being in the countryside.

Using 'the rural area' and 'the land area' is unidiomatic when speaking generally; use plural 'rural areas' or 'the countryside'. 'Enjoy enjoying' is redundant. Also 'in the land area' is awkward; 'being in the countryside' is natural. Suggest removing repetition and choosing correct nouns/articles.

× The all side all all corner deal the greenery, greenery, lush green greenery and my mood always bring a good and.

✓ Everywhere you look there is greenery and lush plants, and it always lifts my mood.

Original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('all side all all corner', 'greenery, greenery'). Word order and verb forms are incorrect ('my mood always bring a good and' lacks object and uses 'bring' instead of 'is lifted' or 'lifts'). Rephrase to a clear sentence: indicate location ('everywhere you look'), use 'there is' for existence, and a proper verb for mood ('lifts my mood' or 'improves my mood').

× I prefer the view in my country because India is a diverse country.

✓ I prefer views in my country because India is a diverse country.

Minor issue: 'the view' sounds like a single view; when speaking generally, use plural 'views'. Tense is fine but number needs correction for general statement.

× There are so many places where I can, I can go and spend the time with my friends or family members.

✓ There are many places where I can go and spend time with friends or family members.

Repetition of 'I can, I can' is unnecessary. 'Spend the time' should be 'spend time' in general statements. Remove redundancy and simplify word order.

× So I also enjoy, uh, enjoy a place alone.

✓ I also enjoy visiting places alone.

The phrase 'enjoy a place alone' is unidiomatic. Use 'visiting places alone' or 'enjoy being alone at a place'. Also remove filler 'uh' and repetition of 'enjoy'.

× And I also click, I click some pictures.

✓ I also take some pictures.

'Click' as a verb is informal and the repetition 'I click, I click' is incorrect. Use 'take pictures' and avoid repetition. Gerund/infinitive not needed here.

× I love the, uh, less green areas in countryside areas as well as.

✓ I also like the less green areas in the countryside.

Sentence is incomplete and contains filler 'uh' and awkward phrasing 'less green areas in countryside areas as well as.' Use 'the countryside' and complete the idea. If contrasting, specify 'as well as' what; here keep it simple: 'I also like the less green areas in the countryside.'