Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler phrases (e.g., 'a bunch of', 'like'), and correct singular/plural and article errors. Use one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I travel. For example, I visited Hong Kong last month and took over 200 photos of cityscapes, restaurants and cafés. I like capturing atmospheres because they remind me of trip experiences.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then a clear reason with correct sentence structure. Remove conversational fillers ('actually', 'to be honest', 'like') and fix awkward phrases. Use a linking word to connect reason to preference and provide one specific example.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more scenic. Living near Seoul, I often see skyscrapers and traffic, so I enjoy visiting small villages or parks to relax and take photos of nature.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clear grammar. Avoid negatives and vague phrases; state preference and give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, so) and correct articles and pluralization.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new cultures and landmarks. For instance, I like visiting famous cities abroad to photograph unique architecture and street scenes that I cannot find at home.

× I do love capturing a bunch of pictures of different views, especially when I'm traveling to another countries.

✓ I do love capturing a bunch of pictures of different views, especially when I'm traveling to other countries.

Use 'other countries' (no article) rather than 'another countries'. 'Another' is for singular nouns; 'other' is used with plural nouns. Suggestion: use 'other countries' or 'another country' depending on meaning.

× For example, recently I just went to Hong Kong one month ago.

✓ For example, I went to Hong Kong one month ago.

Using both 'recently' and 'just' with 'one month ago' is redundant and awkward. Keep one time expression. Also 'recently' and 'one month ago' both indicate past — simple past 'went' is correct. Suggestion: 'I went to Hong Kong one month ago.' or 'I recently went to Hong Kong.'

× At the time I got more than like 200 pictures of city views, restaurants or even cafe or bars.

✓ At that time I got more than 200 pictures of city views, restaurants, and even cafes or bars.

Use 'that time' instead of 'the time' for this context. 'More than like' is informal and redundant; use 'more than 200'. 'Cafe' should be plural 'cafes' to match 'bars'. Also add commas and 'and' for a proper list. Suggestion: avoid filler words like 'like' in formal speech.

× Since I'm living inside the city which is near to Seoul, it means I'm always watching or like passing skyscrapers or even like traffic jams off the street.

✓ Since I live in a city near Seoul, I am always seeing or passing skyscrapers and even traffic jams on the streets.

Use simple present 'I live' for habitual state rather than 'I'm living'. 'Inside the city' is better as 'in a city'. 'Near to' should be 'near'. Avoid fillers 'like'. 'Watching' is unnatural here; use 'seeing'. 'Traffic jams off the street' is incorrect preposition; use 'on the streets'. Also plural consistency: 'streets' matches 'skyscrapers'. Suggestion: use concise, standard prepositions and avoid fillers.

× So I really love to enjoy to watch little area.

✓ So I really enjoy watching small areas.

The phrase 'love to enjoy to watch' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoy watching' or 'love watching'. 'Little area' should be 'small areas' or 'quiet areas' depending on meaning. Suggestion: choose a single verb ('enjoy' or 'love') followed by a gerund, and use appropriate adjective-noun collocation.

× Actually I mean refuse to do like looking for some views of good place in my country.

✓ Actually, I don't look for scenic places in my country.

The original is ungrammatical and uses fillers. 'I mean refuse to do like' is incorrect. Use a clear negative: 'I don't look for' or 'I refuse to look for'. 'Some views of good place' is awkward; 'scenic places' expresses intended meaning. Suggestion: simplify to a clear verb phrase and correct noun phrase.

× So I much prefer to travel another countries and look for a beautiful city of the country which is the famous or even attractive.

✓ So I much prefer to travel to other countries and look for beautiful cities that are famous or attractive.

'Travel another countries' lacks preposition 'to' and uses 'another' with plural; change to 'travel to other countries'. 'Look for a beautiful city of the country' is awkward—use 'look for beautiful cities'. 'Which is the famous or even attractive' is incorrect clause; use 'that are famous or attractive'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, plural agreement, and relative clause 'that are' for descriptions.