Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce fillers (e.g., "uh"), tighten phrasing, and add one specific brief example to make the response more natural and informative. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and use a linking phrase when adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures; it’s one of my main hobbies. It relaxes me and helps me feel connected to nature, for example when I photograph rivers and forests near my town during weekend walks.

Sugerencia: Remove hesitation sounds and complete your final sentence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then use a linking phrase to add a specific supporting detail (what you saw or felt). Avoid trailing off; conclude the thought. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I live in a city and rarely see natural landscapes. For example, last summer I visited my hometown and walked through green hills and rice fields, which felt very peaceful and inspiring for photography.

Sugerencia: Eliminate filler words and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "the views it has" → "the views it offers"). Start with a direct statement, then give a clear reason and one brief specific example. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because many foreign places offer different types of greenery and landscapes I haven’t seen at home. For instance, I would love to photograph the lush countryside of New Zealand because it’s very different from my city’s scenery.

× It makes me calm and, uh, makes me feel connected with the nature because mostly I take pictures of the environment, the natural scenarios that I can find anywhere.

✓ It makes me calm and makes me feel connected to nature because mostly I take pictures of the environment and the natural scenes that I can find anywhere.

Use 'connected to' not 'connected with' when describing an emotional connection; 'the nature' is incorrect because 'nature' is an uncountable noun here and does not need 'the'; 'scenarios' is awkward when referring to landscapes — use 'scenes' instead; replace the comma before 'and the natural scenes' with 'and' to join parallel nouns. Suggestion: Use 'connected to nature' and prefer 'scenes' or 'landscapes' for natural views.

× Uh, rural areas, as I live in the city, I don't get to see much of the landscapes, the hills or the green scenarios that we can find in rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas. Since I live in the city, I don't get to see many landscapes, hills, or green scenes that we can find in rural areas.

Original is a fragment starting with 'Uh, rural areas' and mixes clauses awkwardly. Recast as two sentences: state preference, then give reason. Use 'many' not 'much' with countable plural 'landscapes'; use 'scenes' rather than 'scenarios'. Use commas to separate items in a list. Suggestion: Make full sentences and match quantifier to noun type ('many' for countable plurals).

× So I'm definitely interested to go there.

✓ So I'm definitely interested in going there.

After 'interested' we use the preposition 'in' plus a gerund ('going'), not the infinitive 'to go'. Suggestion: Use 'interested in doing' for expressions of interest.

× For example, last summer I went to my hometown and it was filled with greenery and it was so.

✓ For example, last summer I went to my hometown and it was filled with greenery and it was beautiful.

The phrase 'it was so' is incomplete and informal; replace with an adjective that completes the idea, such as 'beautiful'. The past tense 'went' and 'was' are correct; only completion of the sentence is needed. Suggestion: Finish descriptions with a clear adjective or clause (e.g., 'it was beautiful' or 'it was so lush and peaceful').

× Umm in other countries, because in my country the views I that it has, I have already visited many places so I am already familiar to it.

✓ In other countries, because I have already visited many places in my country and am already familiar with its views.

Original has redundant and incorrect pronoun use: 'the views I that it has' is ungrammatical. Also 'familiar to' is incorrect collocation — use 'familiar with'. Reorder to make the sentence concise: state reason ('I have already visited many places in my country') then the result ('am familiar with its views'). Suggestion: Use 'familiar with' and avoid redundant relative clauses; use possessive 'its views' to refer back to 'my country'.

× But in other countries I love the greenery that they offer because umm I can't find that in my city.

✓ But in other countries I love the greenery they offer because I can't find that in my city.

Remove the unnecessary pronoun 'that' after 'greenery' — while not strictly wrong, the sentence is smoother without it. Also avoid filler 'umm'. The rest is grammatically correct. Suggestion: Omit unnecessary filler words and redundant pronouns for clarity.