Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần giảm việc lặp từ và những tiếng ngắt quãng (uh, umm). Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích, mục đích chụp ảnh) và sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: tránh lặp “I really like” nhiều lần, sửa ngữ pháp như “taking pictures” và “saved good memories”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views because it lets me remember special places I visit. For example, I often capture city skylines at sunset and quiet countryside scenes to preserve memories of trips and long walks.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, tránh nói lắp và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ “my cities” → “my city” hoặc “cities” appropriately). Nên đưa thêm lý do khác nhau cho mỗi lựa chọn và nối ý bằng liên từ như “because” hoặc “however”. Giữ câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc, tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer different experiences. Urban areas have lively streets and architecture, while rural areas are peaceful and full of natural beauty. Therefore, I enjoy taking photos in both settings.

Sugerencia: Trả lời cần cụ thể hóa lý do tại sao thích cảnh ở trong nước và nước ngoài, sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ “another countries” → “other countries”), và tránh nói lặp như “I really like”. Dùng một câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết ví dụ (về văn hóa, kiến trúc, thiên nhiên) để làm phong phú câu trả lời.

Ejemplo: I like views both in my country and abroad because each offers unique attractions. At home I appreciate familiar landscapes and cultural sites, while other countries provide different architecture and new perspectives, so I enjoy photographing both.

× I really like taking pictures in different views because I really want to uh, see me in different places and I really want to hang out.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because I really want to see myself in different places and I really want to hang out.

The phrase 'see me' is incorrect because the reflexive pronoun 'myself' is required when the subject 'I' and the object refer to the same person. Use 'see myself' instead of 'see me'. Also use the preposition 'of' with 'taking pictures of different views' for natural collocation.

× I really like taking picture because it's helped me save me good memory.

✓ I really like taking pictures because it has helped me preserve good memories.

Multiple issues: 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures' (collocation with 'taking'); 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' or 'it's helped' but followed by correct object; 'save me good memory' is ungrammatical — use 'helped me preserve good memories' or 'save good memories'. Also change 'memory' to plural 'memories' to match context.

× I think I like uh, both of them because umm in my cities have many peaceful and beautiful places, so in both areas I really like it.

✓ I think I like both of them because my city has many peaceful and beautiful places, so I really like both areas.

'in my cities have' is ungrammatical: subject and verb order incorrect and plural 'cities' conflicts with 'my city'. Use 'my city has' (subject-verb). Also 'in both areas I really like it' is awkward; better 'I really like both areas'. Removed unnecessary preposition 'in'.

× I think I still like both of them because in my city is very beautiful and another countries is still beautiful and I really like to see them in my eyes.

✓ I think I still like both of them because my city is very beautiful and other countries are also beautiful, and I really like seeing them with my own eyes.

Several agreement and word choice issues: 'in my city is very beautiful' should be 'my city is very beautiful' (no 'in'); 'another countries is' is wrong — use 'other countries are' (plural subject and plural verb). 'I really like to see them in my eyes' is unnatural; use 'seeing them with my own eyes'.