Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and shows enthusiasm, but it is slightly repetitive and has grammatical errors. Make the response more concise with a clear topic sentence, use linking words for coherence, correct tense/grammar (e.g., avoid 'especially that I like'), and add a specific detail or example to make it more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love photography. For example, I often photograph beaches at sunset because the colours and reflections on the water are beautiful. Also, I like capturing everyday scenes, such as people walking along the shore, because they show quiet, underappreciated moments.

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates flexibility but is long-winded and contains grammar issues. Start with a clear direct sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to add a specific reason or example. Improve verb forms and natural phrasing (e.g., 'as long as I can'). Keep to a maximum of about three sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference; as long as I can take interesting photos, I'm happy. For instance, in cities I enjoy photographing architecture and street life, while in the countryside I focus on landscapes and natural light.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses opinion and reason, but it is informal and contains repetition and an unfinished ending. Provide a clear topic sentence, give one specific reason with concise language, avoid overgeneralisation (e.g., 'it's cleaner'), and finish the thought. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing scenery in other countries because new places inspire me and offer different landscapes. For example, when I visit a foreign city I often find unique architecture and lighting I haven't seen at home, which leads to more creative photos.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially that I like photography so much.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially because I like photography so much.

The student used 'especially that' incorrectly. 'Especially' should be followed by a phrase that clarifies or emphasizes; to give a reason, use 'especially because' or restructure the sentence. Suggestion: use 'especially because' or 'particularly since' to show reason.

× I like taking pictures of beaches on the horizon.

✓ I like taking pictures of beaches on the shore.

'On the horizon' refers to where the sky meets the sea and is not where beaches are located. The correct preposition for beaches is 'on the shore' or 'on the beach'. Use 'on the shore' or 'at the beach' when talking about beaches.

× A lot of wonderful things that are usually underappreciated, especially on normal days.

✓ There are a lot of wonderful things that are usually underappreciated, especially on normal days.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb. Adding 'There are' completes the sentence. Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb.

× It doesn't matter for me for as long as I get to get to take a lot of pictures of different sceneries, then it doesn't matter if I be in an urban or a rural area or the sea.

✓ It doesn't matter to me as long as I get to take a lot of pictures of different scenes; it doesn't matter whether I am in an urban area, a rural area, or by the sea.

Several issues: use 'to me' not 'for me'; remove duplicate 'get to'; 'sceneries' is awkward—use 'scenes' or 'scenery'; 'then' is unnecessary; 'if I be' is incorrect — use 'whether I am'. Also 'by the sea' or 'at the sea' is more natural. Restructure for clarity and grammatical agreement.

× Oh, this is a hard question because I haven't been to a lot of countries, but definitely I like taking pictures of sceneries outside of my country because it's something new to me.

✓ Oh, this is a hard question because I haven't been to many countries, but I definitely like taking pictures of scenery outside my country because it's something new to me.

Use 'many' with plural countable nouns ('many countries') rather than 'a lot of' in this context. 'Sceneries' is not commonly used—'scenery' (uncountable) is correct. 'Outside of my country' can be shortened to 'outside my country'. Tense 'haven't been' is fine.

× And also it's cleaner in a lot of in a lot of different cities and areas outside of the Philippines, so.

✓ Also, it's cleaner in many different cities and areas outside the Philippines.

Eliminate the duplicated phrase 'in a lot of in a lot of'. Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for variety and formality. Use 'outside the Philippines' rather than 'outside of the Philippines' (both are acceptable, but 'outside the Philippines' is tighter); remove trailing 'so'. Ensure sentences do not end with filler words.