Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix grammar and use specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, so, for instance). Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes because each photo can tell a unique story. For example, I often capture city streets to show busy life and landscapes to convey calm, which makes my collection more interesting to viewers.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you like both, then support with specific details and correct sentence structure. Use linking words (both...and, while, because) and avoid filler sounds or repeated words. Mention concrete examples of subjects and why you like them.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views because each offers different subjects. In the city I focus on architecture and busy streets, while in rural areas I photograph mountains and rivers for peaceful landscapes.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and hesitations; state your preference clearly then explain with specific reasons. Use linking phrases like but, however, and for example. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct pluralization and articles.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing in my own country because I'm familiar with local scenes and culture, but I also enjoy shooting abroad to capture different atmospheres. For example, visiting another country lets me photograph unique architecture and unfamiliar natural landscapes.

× Yes, I like to take pictures in different views, different views and different poses because each post has have a different meaning and if you have lot of collections of photo then people will interact with you more and more.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures from different viewpoints and in different poses because each post has a different meaning, and if you have a lot of photos collected, people will interact with you more and more.

Issues: (1) 'in different views' is awkward — use 'from different viewpoints' or 'of different views' for clarity (word choice). (2) Repeated phrase 'different views, different views' is unnecessary (sentence structure). (3) 'has have' is an error: use the singular present 'has' to match singular noun 'each post' (subject-verb agreement/third person singular). (4) 'if you have lot of collections of photo' is incorrect: use the determiner 'a lot of' and plural 'photos' and simpler 'collected' (article/quantifier/plural). Suggestions: simplify redundant phrases, ensure subject-verb agreement ('each post has'), use correct quantifiers ('a lot of photos'), and choose natural collocations ('from different viewpoints', 'in different poses').

× Yes, I prefer both urban areas and rural areas. In urban areas B take photos in the city and in rural area we take photo in different different on mountains, in rivers or in.

✓ Yes, I prefer both urban and rural areas. In urban areas I take photos in the city, and in rural areas we take photos in different places such as on mountains or by rivers.

Issues: (1) Repetition 'urban areas and rural areas' can be shortened to 'urban and rural areas' (style). (2) 'B take photos' is likely a transcription error — should be 'I take photos' (pronoun). (3) 'in rural area' needs plural 'rural areas' and article consistency (article/number). (4) 'we take photo' should be plural 'we take photos' (singular/plural). (5) 'in different different on mountains, in rivers or in.' has redundancy and wrong prepositions: use 'in different places such as on mountains or by rivers' (preposition and sentence structure). Suggestions: fix pronoun, use plural nouns where appropriate, remove repetition, and use correct prepositions ('on' for mountains, 'by' or 'along' for rivers).

× Yes, I prefer my country and I love, I love to take pictures in my country, but I am also interested to take pictures in other country because in other country the atmosphere is different, uh, the environment is different and I have to explore more and more places.

✓ Yes, I prefer my country and I love to take pictures there, but I am also interested in taking pictures in other countries because the atmosphere and environment are different, and I want to explore many more places.

Issues: (1) Repetition 'I love, I love' is unnecessary (sentence structure). (2) 'interested to take pictures' is incorrect collocation — use 'interested in taking pictures' (verb + -ing form and preposition). (3) 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country' (singular/plural). (4) Repeating 'in other country' is redundant — use 'because the atmosphere and environment are different' (style). (5) 'I have to explore more and more places' is awkward; 'I want to explore many more places' fits better (modal/tense and natural phrasing). Suggestions: avoid repetition, use 'interested in' + gerund, ensure correct plurality ('other countries'), and choose natural verbs ('want to explore').