Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct words and linking phrases. Avoid unclear phrases and pronunciation-like fillers (e.g. "ankle"). Aim for 2–4 sentences, include reasons or examples, and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing nature. For example, I often photograph skies at sunset and close-ups of flowers to preserve their colors and shapes.

Sugerencia: Open with a clear, concise preference, then support it with specific reasons and one linking word. Avoid vague or poetic expressions that may confuse the listener (e.g. "goddess of the natures"). Mention concrete features and contrast with cities in one sentence. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer mountains, rivers, and rice fields that feel peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing winding rivers and terraced fields, which is quite different from the noise and traffic of cities.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain with specific contrasts. Use correct grammar (singular/plural) and avoid filler words. Limit to 2–3 sentences: state whether you prefer one more, or both equally, and give 1–2 clear reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad because each place has unique scenery. For instance, my country has diverse landscapes and cultural sites, while other countries offer different geological features and traditions to explore.

× But The thing is I don't have any specific qualification for taking it and I don't have any idea of taking pictures.

✓ But the thing is I don't have any specific qualifications for taking pictures and I don't have any idea how to take them.

Errors: incorrect capitalization of 'The', article/word choice 'qualification' should be plural 'qualifications' (article errors/number), 'taking it' is vague and ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'how to take them' to refer to pictures. Use lowercase 'the' after a conjunction and pluralize when generalizing about skills.

× So I don't know the ankle and all, that's kind of proficient, she and all.

✓ So I don't know the angle and all that makes someone proficient.

Errors: 'ankle' is a wrong word (incorrect word choice) and 'she and all' is unclear pronoun use. Suggestion: replace 'ankle' with 'angle' and rephrase to 'that makes someone proficient' to convey intended meaning. Avoid vague phrases like 'and all'.

× But I do love taking pictures when I see the beautiful skies, beautiful flowers, the beauty of nature I wanted to capture.

✓ But I do love taking pictures when I see beautiful skies, flowers, or other natural beauty that I want to capture.

Errors: run-on sentence and tense mismatch ('I wanted' should match present 'do love'). Suggestion: split ideas and use present 'want' to match habitual action, and simplify repeated adjectives.

× In my perspective, I prefer the views in rural areas because of the village beauty, the mountains, the rivers, the Paddy fields, everything.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer views in rural areas because of the village beauty, the mountains, the rivers, the paddy fields, and so on.

Errors: use of 'In my perspective' is nonstandard preposition; correct phrase is 'From my perspective' or 'In my opinion'. Also 'Paddy' should be lowercase 'paddy' as a common noun. Suggestion: use 'and so on' instead of 'everything' for natural speech.

× The goddess of the natures actually live in the rural area which I believe and also it is very different from the cities.

✓ I believe the goddess of nature actually lives in rural areas, and they are very different from cities.

Errors: 'goddess of the natures' incorrect pluralization and article use; 'live' should be 'lives' to agree with 'goddess' (third person singular). 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general statement. Suggestion: use singular 'nature' and match verb agreement; simplify structure.

× From my perspective, I love nature more than big cities and rush and traffic.

✓ From my perspective, I love nature more than big cities, with their rush and traffic.

Errors: awkward noun list 'rush and traffic' and missing preposition to compare. Suggestion: add 'with their' to clarify that 'rush and traffic' describe cities.

× Actually, I do prefer the views from my country as well as from the other countries.

✓ Actually, I prefer views from my country as well as from other countries.

Errors: article 'the' before 'views' and 'the other countries' is unnecessary. Suggestion: omit 'the' to make general statement and remove 'do' unless for emphasis.

× Every countries has its own beauty.

✓ Every country has its own beauty.

Errors: 'Every' requires singular noun 'country' and singular verb 'has'. Suggestion: use 'every country has' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× So my country it is of different cultures, different religions, different, uh, geological structures and quite fond of beauty.

✓ My country has different cultures, religions, and geological structures, and I am quite fond of its beauty.

Errors: incorrect sentence structure with redundant subject 'my country it is', and awkward 'quite fond of beauty' lacking subject. Suggestion: use 'My country has...' and specify 'I am fond of its beauty'.

× But as well as the other countries, they are specific nature, specific beauty.

✓ But other countries also have their own distinct natural features and beauty.

Errors: incorrect pronoun/phrase 'they are specific nature' and awkward wording. Suggestion: rephrase to 'have their own distinct natural features and beauty' to be clear and grammatical.