Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and repetitive phrases. Mention a brief reason or example to make the answer vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture buildings and street scenes because I like their architectural details; I also pay attention to composition and angles to make the photos more aesthetic.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, then explain specific reasons with clear vocabulary. Replace vague phrasing ("rational aspects") with precise descriptors, and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep length to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is calmer and less crowded. For instance, I enjoy walking among fields and trees, which makes it easier to relax and notice natural details.

Sugerencia: State your preference directly, then give specific, well-described reasons and a short example. Use correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and clearer vocabulary (e.g., "meadows," "paddy fields"). Avoid trailing or incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has unique landscapes such as wide meadows and lush paddy fields. For example, the terraces and green fields near my hometown create a peaceful scene I rarely find abroad.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, such as I like taking pictures of buildings, surroundings, environments and it should be like aesthetic and uh the view, the angle should be perfect enough to get.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, such as buildings and surroundings; the image should be aesthetic, and the angle should be good enough to capture it.

Errors: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' with 'like' in a positive statement, awkward repetition and noun list, incorrect use of 'should be like aesthetic', and unclear phrase 'perfect enough to get'. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I like' for regular preferences, combine similar nouns, replace 'should be like aesthetic' with 'should be aesthetic', and use 'good enough to capture it' for clarity.

× Basically, I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas because in rural areas I think these have much more rational aspects to visit and roaming around with the surroundings and environmental serenity.

✓ Basically, I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas because I think rural areas have more attractive aspects for visiting and wandering among the peaceful surroundings.

Errors: mismatch and awkward pronoun/reference 'these' referring to 'rural areas' and word choice 'rational aspects'. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb agreement 'rural areas have', avoid vague pronouns, and choose clearer vocabulary like 'attractive aspects' and 'wandering among the peaceful surroundings'.

× I do prefer views in my own countries rather than other countries because my country has some attractive features which other country don't have.

✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because my country has some attractive features that other countries don't have.

Errors: 'countries' vs 'country' inconsistency and incorrect plural agreement 'other country don't have'. Suggestion: Use singular 'country' for 'my own country', and use 'other countries don't have' to match plural form; also avoid unnecessary 'do' in positive preference.

× It has grainy features like Meadow field and the Paddy field which looks.

✓ It has features such as meadows and paddy fields, which look beautiful.

Errors: inappropriate adjective 'grainy' and incorrect capitalization and article use 'Meadow field'/'the Paddy field', and sentence fragment ending 'which looks'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns 'meadows' and 'paddy fields', avoid unnecessary capitalization, and complete the relative clause with an adjective like 'which look beautiful'.