Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, use correct tense and article usage, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'when', 'because', 'and') correctly and avoid repetition. Also correct common errors: say 'I like taking pictures when I travel', 'sometimes I share photos with my friends and family', and add a specific reason or example to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes. I enjoy taking pictures when I travel because I like capturing memorable places and moments. For example, when I visited the mountains last year I photographed the sunrise and later shared the best shots with my family, which made them feel like they were there.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'for example'). Correct vocabulary (say 'greenery' or 'green spaces', 'fresh air') and avoid filler words ('uh', 'and, and'). Provide one concrete detail or example.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy green spaces and fresh air. For example, when I visit the countryside I love walking by small fountains and fields of grass, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then a specific reason or brief example. Correct grammar: say 'my own country' and avoid vague statements like 'a lot of things'. Add detail about what you like to see at home or mention a contrast with other countries.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in my own country because I love its landscapes and culture. For instance, I enjoy photographing historical temples and coastal scenery at home, and I know the best spots where the light is beautiful.

× Yes, I like taking picture when I was when I'm travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures when I travel.

The noun 'picture' needs plural 'pictures' to match 'taking' (general activity). Also the tense/structure was mixed ('when I was when I'm travel') so correct to simple present 'when I travel' to express habitual action. Use article only if singular countable ('a picture'), but here plural is natural.

× Yes, I like taking picture when I was when I'm travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures when I travel.

The sentence mixed past and present ('when I was' and 'I'm'). For a habitual preference use the simple present 'when I travel.' Avoid mixing tenses in the same clause.

× Uh, it's, it's Remember Me and like yes, I like taking picture when I was travel and sometime I shared picture to my friend and my family.

✓ I remember, yes, I like taking pictures when I travel and sometimes I share pictures with my friends and my family.

Original is disfluent and mixes tenses. 'Remember Me' is unclear; likely 'I remember' fits. Use plural 'pictures.' Use 'sometimes' adverb and present tense 'share' for habitual action. Use 'with' rather than 'to' for sharing, and plural 'friends.'

× sometime I shared picture to my friend and my family.

✓ Sometimes I share pictures with my friends and my family.

Countable noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' for repeated actions. 'Friend' should be plural if referring to more than one, and 'with' is the correct preposition for sharing. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency.

× sometime I shared picture to my friend and my family.

✓ Sometimes I share pictures with my friends and my family.

Use 'with' when saying you share something with someone. 'To' suggests giving and is less natural here. Also adjust tense and plural as above.

× It's so fun.

✓ It's so fun.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but in formal speech 'It's very fun' or 'It's a lot of fun' may sound more natural. No structural correction required.

× I like to be in the rural area because in the rural area, uh, I want to see the fountains and greeneries and, and I need a fresh air from the old so much.

✓ I like being in rural areas because I want to see the fountains and greenery, and I need fresh air so much.

Use gerund 'being' to express preference. Use plural 'rural areas' or 'the countryside.' 'Greeneries' is incorrect; use 'greenery' (uncountable). 'A fresh air' is incorrect: 'fresh air' (no article). 'From the old' is unclear and removed. Keep present tense for habitual preference.

× I like to be in the rural area because in the rural area, uh, I want to see the fountains and greeneries and, and I need a fresh air from the old so much.

✓ I like being in rural areas because I want to see the fountains and greenery, and I need fresh air so much.

'Greeneries' is not used; 'greenery' is an uncountable noun. Also article placement: do not use 'a' before 'fresh air.' Reordering to a more natural phrase improves clarity.

× I need a fresh air from the old so much.

✓ I need fresh air so much.

'From the old' is ungrammatical and unclear. Omit it. 'Fresh air' is used without article; 'from' is not needed.

× I prefer mostly viewing my own countries because I love my country and in my country there's a lot of things to see.

✓ I mostly prefer viewing my own country because I love it and there are a lot of things to see in my country.

Use singular 'country' when referring to the student's own nation. 'Countries' is incorrect here. Also adjust word order for natural emphasis: 'there are a lot of things' (plural) requires 'are' instead of 'there's.'

× in my country there's a lot of things to see.

✓ there are a lot of things to see in my country.

'There's' contracts 'there is' which is singular; because 'a lot of things' is plural, use 'there are.' Place the phrase 'in my country' at the end or beginning for natural word order.