Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use linking words (for example, 'such as' or 'for instance') to make the answer coherent, and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, such as flowers, historic buildings and modern architecture, because each offers unique shapes and colors. For instance, flower close-ups capture delicate details, while old buildings show texture and history.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give 2–3 specific reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Reduce hesitations and redundant words. Be specific about what urban features you like (e.g. contrast of old and new buildings, public gardens).

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because they offer a variety of subjects, such as historic architecture and modern skyscrapers. For example, city gardens provide colorful plants while nearby streets show interesting contrasts between old and new buildings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give clear, specific reasons with examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and avoid repeating words. Mention particular places and what makes their views interesting in concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know where to find the best scenery. For example, in Mumbai you can photograph newly developed buildings and vibrant streets, while in Rajasthan you can capture historic, traditional architecture.

× I would like to take a picture of different views like flowers, old building, new building, like old heritage so that new trees also there.

✓ I would like to take pictures of different views, like flowers, old buildings, new buildings, and old heritage sites, so that new trees are also there.

The speaker mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly (building vs buildings, picture vs pictures). Use plural nouns when referring to more than one item. Also add 'are' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general categories and include verbs to complete clauses.

× So I I like it to take a picture of different view and.

✓ So I like taking pictures of different views.

The original has repetition, incorrect infinitive construction, singular/plural mismatch and an incomplete clause. Use the gerund 'taking' after 'like' for habitual actions and plural 'pictures' and 'views' for general reference.

× Yeah, it it's depend upon what which feature I have to take.

✓ Yeah, it depends on which feature I need to photograph.

Subject-verb agreement and present tense require 'depends' not 'depend'. Also use 'on' instead of 'upon' in this context and replace awkward phrasing 'have to take' with 'need to photograph' for clarity.

× But mostly I would like urban area because in that both the views I had covered old and new, new building so and in that that mostly gardens are there.

✓ But mostly I prefer urban areas because there you can find both old and new views and many new buildings, and there are often gardens.

Original sentence has awkward conjunctions and word order. 'I would like urban area' is unnatural; use 'prefer urban areas'. Replace 'in that both the views I had covered' with a clear clause 'there you can find both old and new views'. Ensure correct verb forms and article usage.

× So it is good good for me to to take a preferred view in urban area.

✓ So it is good for me to take photos in urban areas.

Remove duplicated words and correct noun phrase 'take a preferred view' to natural 'take photos'. Use plural 'urban areas' for generality. The verb 'is' is fine but avoid redundant words.

× Yes, I prefer the views in my country because I know the what are the best places in my country.

✓ Yes, I prefer the views in my country because I know what the best places are.

Extra definite article 'the' before 'what' is incorrect. Also avoid repeating 'in my country' twice; move 'are' to the end for correct clause order in indirect questions.

× So if we go to Mumbai side so it will it will come that newly newly developed building.

✓ So if we go to the Mumbai side, we will see newly developed buildings.

Use 'the Mumbai side' with article, remove repetition, and use 'see' rather than 'come that'. Use plural 'buildings' for general reference. Also correct future tense 'we will see'.

× If we go to the Rajasthan there is not developed building means old buildings are there.

✓ If we go to Rajasthan, there are not many developed buildings; there are mostly old buildings.

Do not use 'the' before country/region names like 'Rajasthan' in this context. Use plural 'buildings' and add 'many' or 'many developed buildings' to convey quantity. Rephrase for clarity and correct verb agreement 'there are'.

× So I prefer my country.

✓ So I prefer the views in my country.

The original sentence is short but lacks clear reference to 'views' asked in the question. Repeating 'the views' makes the answer complete and ties it to the question.