Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: correct grammar, avoid repetition and hesitations, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words and specific details (when/where, why it matters). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because photos help me remember special moments. For example, my wife and I went to Europe for our honeymoon in April, and I took many landscape shots that bring back detailed memories of that trip.

Sugerencia: Make the topic sentence direct and fix grammar. Explain specifically why rural views appeal to you, using linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid filler words and keep to 2–3 supporting sentences with concrete details.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the open landscapes make me feel connected to nature. For example, fields and mountains help me relax and forget city noise, so I can truly unwind during walks or hikes.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and complete the comparison. State why foreign views are preferable with a specific contrast and an example. Fix grammar (use complete sentences, correct articles) and avoid trailing off. Use linking words like however or because.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes that are very different from what I see at home. For example, I live in Japan, but on my honeymoon in Switzerland I was amazed by the vast, snow-capped Alps, which felt completely different from Japan's scenery.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' can be followed by either the infinitive (to take) or the gerund (taking). 'Like to taking' mixes forms and is incorrect. Use 'like taking' or 'like to take'. Suggestion: Use 'I like taking...' or 'I like to take...'. Replace 'to taking' with 'taking'.

× It's mainly because the pictures always, uh, remind me the memories of the pictures.

✓ It's mainly because the pictures always remind me of the memories.

The verb 'remind' takes the structure 'remind someone of something'. Saying 'remind me the memories of the pictures' is incorrect word order and redundant. Also 'the pictures' is repeated unnecessarily. Suggestion: Use 'remind me of the memories' or 'remind me of the pictures'.

× For example, umm, I and my wife went to the Europe as a honeymoon trip on this April and I have a lot of pictures.

✓ For example, my wife and I went to Europe for our honeymoon in April and I have a lot of pictures.

Use subject order 'my wife and I' for natural English. 'Europe' does not need 'the'. Use 'for our honeymoon' rather than 'as a honeymoon trip'. 'on this April' is incorrect preposition and modifier; use 'in April'. Suggestion: 'My wife and I went to Europe for our honeymoon in April.'

× I prefer the view in rural areas, it's mainly because the landscapes, uh, the view of landscapes always fills me that, uh, that I am other part of the nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas; it's mainly because the landscapes make me feel that I am part of nature.

Multiple issues: 'the view in rural areas' should be plural 'views in rural areas' to match general preference (or keep singular with article). 'the view of landscapes always fills me that' is ungrammatical—use 'make me feel that' to express effect. 'other part of the nature' is incorrect: use 'part of nature' (no 'the' and no 'other'). Suggestion: 'I prefer views in rural areas because the landscapes make me feel part of nature.'

× So I think unwind.

✓ So I think it helps me unwind.

'I think unwind' lacks an object/structure; 'unwind' is a verb and needs a subject or to be used in a phrase. Use 'it helps me unwind' or 'I can unwind'. Suggestion: 'So I think it helps me unwind.'

× I prefer the views of another country and for example I live in Japan, but as I said, I and my wife went to Switzerland as a honeymoon trip and views of the Alps mountains was umm the completely different from the.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries. For example, I live in Japan, but as I said, my wife and I went to Switzerland for our honeymoon, and the views of the Alps were completely different.

Use 'other countries' rather than 'another country' to match 'views' plural. Use 'my wife and I' not 'I and my wife'. 'Switzerland for our honeymoon' is better than 'as a honeymoon trip'. 'Alps mountains' is redundant—'the Alps' suffices. Subject-verb agreement: 'views of the Alps were' (plural). The original ends abruptly; complete the comparison with 'completely different.' Suggestion: 'I prefer the views in other countries. For example... the views of the Alps were completely different.'