Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and shows ideas, but has some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and add one specific detail or short example. Keep it under 4–5 sentences and use a linking word if you add support.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me preserve memories and revisit moments later. For example, I often photograph sunsets during family trips so I can remember the exact colors and atmosphere afterwards.

Sugerencia: Good contrast and opinion, but phrasing is awkward and slightly repetitive. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, use smoother linking words (however, so), correct minor collocations ("beautiful to visit" → "beautiful to visit" ok but simplify), and give a specific concrete example of a rural scene you photograph.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Although cities have impressive skylines, rural areas often feel more peaceful and authentic; for instance, I like photographing small village fields and old wooden houses when I travel because they show local life and calm scenery.

Sugerencia: Your answer is friendly and personal but a bit informal and disorganized. Give a clear direct response first (e.g., I like both), avoid slang contractions (wanna), and structure the supporting detail: briefly explain your bucket list and name 1–2 places with a short reason why. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: I like views both at home and abroad. I made a travel bucket list when I was a teenager, which includes Cox's Bazar for its beaches at home and Paris for its architecture abroad, because each place offers very different and memorable scenery.

× So I think taking picture is crucial for future.

✓ So I think taking pictures is crucial for the future.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to photographs in general (countable noun used in a general sense), and 'future' needs the definite article 'the' when speaking about the future in a general way. Improve by matching number to the general meaning and including the article: 'taking pictures is crucial for the future.'

× Urban areas are beautiful to watch to visit, but from my perspective, rural areas are underrated gems in any country, in any area.

✓ Urban areas are beautiful to visit, but from my perspective, rural areas are underrated gems in any country or region.

The phrase 'beautiful to watch to visit' is incorrect; 'beautiful to visit' or 'beautiful to look at' are correct options. Also 'in any country, in any area' is repetitive; 'any country or region' is clearer. Improve by removing the extra verb 'watch' and choosing a single preposition for location: 'beautiful to visit' and 'in any country or region.'

× So when I travel, I try to visit the rural areas and take a picture or just leave the moment.

✓ So when I travel, I try to visit rural areas and take pictures or simply leave the moment alone.

'Take a picture' could be correct for a single photo, but here the general practice suggests plural 'take pictures.' Also natural English uses 'leave the moment alone' to mean not photographing it. Improve by using plural for habitual action and adding 'alone' to complete the idiom.

× Actually, I prefer both 'cause who doesn't wanna visit other countries, right?

✓ Actually, I prefer both, 'cause who doesn't want to visit other countries, right?

This sentence mainly has colloquial contractions. Add a comma after 'both' for clarity. Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to' in formal contexts. No major article issue, but punctuation and register improve clarity.

× I have made it since I was in Class 8 or 9, and it includes Shunda Wong, Cox's Bazaar, which is in my country but also includes New York, Paris.

✓ I have had it since I was in Class 8 or 9, and it includes Shunda Wung, Cox's Bazar in my country, as well as New York and Paris.

Use 'have had' with 'since' to indicate possession from a past time to now. Also correct place names: 'Cox's Bazar' (common spelling) and 'Shunda Wung' adjusted if that is intended; ensure proper nouns are spelled correctly. Replace 'but also includes' with 'as well as' for parallel listing. Improve by using present perfect for ongoing possession and clearer parallel structure.