Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural, concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix word choice errors (e.g., “looking pictures” → “taking pictures”; remove duplicate words). Use one linking phrase if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially look for interesting compositions and lighting, for example a sunrise over a river or colorful street scenes, because they bring out the mood of the place.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and reduce filler words (e.g., 'you know', 'uh'). Provide one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Correct vocabulary errors ('ruler areas' → 'rural areas').

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cityscapes offer more variety. For example, streets, cafés and parks provide interesting subjects and dynamic scenes, and the movement of people and traffic adds atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer and avoid negative or absolute statements about your country. Fix grammar and word order (e.g., 'After for' → 'I prefer', 'there's actually nothing much special' → 'I find my country less varied for photography'). Use specific examples and one linking phrase to explain why.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different architectural styles and atmospheres. For example, cities like Paris, London and New York have distinctive landmarks and street scenes that inspire me creatively, so I hope to photograph them in the future.

× Yes, I'm very fond of looking pictures of many different views.

✓ Yes, I'm very fond of looking at pictures of many different views.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to viewing something. Use 'looking at pictures' not 'looking pictures.' Improve by practicing verb+preposition collocations (e.g., look at, listen to, care about).

× I try to find an aesthetic associate and try to associate with with that view and click pictures which have a very good potential.

✓ I try to find an aesthetic aspect and try to connect with that view and take pictures that have a lot of potential.

Multiple errors: 'associate' is the wrong noun; 'aspect' fits context. 'Associate with with' repeats a word and should be 'connect with' or 'associate with'. 'Click pictures' is informal in this context; 'take pictures' is standard. 'Which have a very good potential' uses incorrect article and phrasing; use 'that have a lot of potential.' Practice choosing correct nouns and common phrasal verbs, and avoid duplicate words.

× I prefer views in urban areas because it's mostly cityscapes.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they are mostly cityscapes.

The subject 'views' is plural, so the verb should be plural ('they are'), not 'it’s' (it is). This is a subject-verb agreement/third-person singular mismatch. Match verb number to subject (plural subjects take plural verbs).

× I think cityscapes have, you know, more locations like it's got cafes, it's got parks, it's got, uh, the hum of vehicles moving around and I think it's just a better view than ruler areas compared to rural areas.

✓ I think cityscapes have, you know, more locations like cafes, parks, and the hum of vehicles moving around, and I think they are just better views than rural areas.

Problems: inconsistent pronouns and repetition ('it's got' repeated) and 'ruler areas' is a misspelling of 'rural areas.' Also 'better view than rural areas' compares singular to plural awkwardly. Use plural pronoun 'they are' to match 'cityscapes' and streamline the list. Avoid filler phrases in formal responses and ensure correct spelling.

× After for views in other countries because there's actually nothing much special in my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because there's actually not much special in my country.

'After for views' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'I prefer views.' Use 'not much special' or better 'not much that is special.' Fix sentence structure by placing subject and verb properly: 'I prefer views in other countries because there is not much special in my country.'

× Uh, you cities like Paris, NY and in London there are many more attractive attraction places and these cities just have a different aesthetic, which I'm really fond of and I wish to visit these cities further in the future.

✓ Cities like Paris, New York and London have many more attractive places, and these cities have a different aesthetic, which I'm really fond of. I wish to visit them in the future.

Errors include incorrect use of 'you' instead of 'cities', unnecessary repetition 'attractive attraction places' (use 'attractive places'), inconsistent city names ('NY' -> 'New York'), and wordiness 'further in the future.' Split into two sentences for clarity and use correct articles and pronouns ('them') to avoid repetition.