Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural, concise, and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation sounds, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words (for example, so, because) and provide one specific reason or example. Correct common errors (e.g., "I like taking," "help me remember").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they are often unique and memorable. For example, I recently photographed a sunset over the river, and the phone photos help me remember the colors and feeling of that moment.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, fix grammar, and explain with one or two clear supporting details. Replace vague phrases and hesitations with precise vocabulary (e.g., "architecture," "urban skyline"). Use a linking word like "because" and a short example to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I love architecture and city skylines. For example, walking through the downtown area I enjoy photographing historic buildings and modern skyscrapers because they show the creativity and energy of people.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and concisely, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use clear linking words (e.g., "because," "for example") and provide a specific reason or example why foreign views appeal to you. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include a short personal detail or plan.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new cultures and landscapes. For example, I would love to photograph traditional markets and coastal villages abroad to capture scenes that are different from those in my country.

× Uh yes, I like take taking pictures of different views because different views are usually unique and special.

✓ Uh yes, I like taking pictures of different views because different views are usually unique and special.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking', not the base form 'take'. Use 'like taking' to express enjoyment of an activity.

× If I can just record them in this way, I can memorize them forever in my mind or they, they have kind of the phones can, umm, gives us a lot of ways to uh, just do not forget them yeah.

✓ If I can record them this way, I can keep them in my memory, or phones can help us not forget them.

The original sentence is disfluent and contains redundant phrases. Simplify structure: 'record them this way' and use 'keep them in my memory'. Clarify the second clause: 'phones can help us not forget them'. Remove repeated words and filler sounds.

× I think I prefer views in urban areas because I'm a big fan of, you know, the architecture, The, those are beautiful architectures.

✓ I think I prefer views in urban areas because I'm a big fan of architecture; those buildings are beautiful.

'Architecture' is an uncountable noun, so 'the architecture' or simply 'architecture' is correct. 'Beautiful architectures' is incorrect because 'architectures' is not used countably for buildings; use 'beautiful buildings' or 'beautiful architecture'.

× Makes me feel like I'm, I'm wasting, uh, the pulse of human civilization.

✓ They make me feel connected to the pulse of human civilization.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject and uses 'wasting' incorrectly. 'Make me feel connected to' expresses the intended meaning that the buildings evoke human progress. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'They make'.

× And it is just, you know, the masterpiece of human and I think it's kind of art.

✓ And they are, you know, masterpieces of human creativity, and I think they're a kind of art.

Use plural 'they are' to refer back to buildings. 'Masterpiece of human' is incomplete; 'masterpieces of human creativity' is clearer. Match number and use appropriate noun 'creativity'.

× I think I prefer the views in other countries because every, each of us just we, we create, crave for something new and we want to just experience a different kind of life.

✓ I think I prefer the views in other countries because each of us craves something new and wants to experience a different kind of life.

Remove redundant words ('every, each of us just we, we') and use correct verb 'craves' with subject 'each'. 'Crave for' is incorrect; use 'crave' without 'for'. Also adjust verbs for subject-verb agreement.

× So different views, uh, which is very, uh, unique from my countries.

✓ So different views that are very different from those in my country are more attractive to me.

Replace 'which is' with 'that are' to match plural 'views'. 'My countries' is incorrect if speaker means their own country; use 'my country' or 'those in my country'. 'Unique from' is nonstandard; use 'different from' or 'different to'.

× It will be more attractive for me and I really want to go to other countries someday to just appreciate.

✓ They are more attractive to me, and I really want to visit other countries someday to appreciate them.

Match pronouns and number: 'They are' (referring to views) and 'visit other countries' is more natural than 'go to'. Include object 'them' after 'appreciate' to complete the verb's meaning.