Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более связно и естественно: формулируйте чёткое тематическое предложение, избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, исправляйте грамматику и порядок слов. Дайте конкретный пример, когда и что вы фотографировали, используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода (например: "for example", "because").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views; it's one of my hobbies. For example, last summer I photographed the coastline near my hometown because the light at sunset was beautiful. I usually carry my camera when I visit parks or viewpoints, so I can capture interesting scenes.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте чёткое мнение в начале, затем приведите 1–2 связанных и конкретных причины, избегайте избыточных вводных слов и повторов. Используйте связки (e.g., "because", "however", "also") и корректную грамматику при описании причин предпочтения.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because they remind me of my hometown and offer many interesting architectural details. For example, I enjoy photographing old buildings and busy streets since they show the city's character, although rural landscapes can be peaceful and beautiful too.

Sugerencia: Дайте прямой ответ сразу, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Избегайте неопределённых фраз и ошибок в названии страны; используйте точные формулировки и связки (например: "on the other hand", "for example").

Ejemplo: It depends: I love the views in my own country because they are familiar and meaningful to me, but I also want to explore views abroad to see different cultures. For example, I would like to visit Portugal because its coastal scenery and historic cities look very interesting to photograph.

× Yes I do I think it's my hobby.

✓ Yes, I do. I think it's my hobby.

The original sentence runs clauses together without proper punctuation and capitalization. Use a comma or a period to separate responses and capitalize the next sentence. Also add a period after the abbreviation 'I' is correct; ensure spacing after punctuation. Suggestion: separate into two sentences: 'Yes, I do.' and 'I think it's my hobby.'

× I always take a picture then I in beautiful place and umm, I think umm, I suppose uh, every person like it.

✓ I always take pictures when I am in a beautiful place, and I think, I suppose, everyone likes it.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and missing verbs: 'take a picture' should be plural 'take pictures' for habitual action (or 'take a picture' with article and context). 'then I in beautiful place' lacks the verb 'am' (present continuous). 'every person like it' violates subject-verb agreement; use 'everyone likes it'. Also reduce filler words. Suggestion: use 'when I am in a beautiful place' to express location and 'everyone likes it' for correct agreement.

× From my perspective, I think I prefer, uh, urban areas because it's look like my, it is look like it looks like my home city and uh, I think it's reason why I prefer it.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer urban areas because they look like my home city, and I think that's the reason why I prefer them.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'it's look like' is wrong; refer to 'urban areas' (plural) so use 'they look like'. Replace 'it is look like' with 'they look like'. 'my home city' is fine. 'it's reason' should be 'that's the reason'. Also 'prefer it' should match plural 'them' or rephrase. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match the noun number and use clear connectors.

× Uh, but uh, however, I think rural areas may beautiful too.

✓ However, I think rural areas may be beautiful too.

Missing linking verb: 'may beautiful' lacks the verb 'be'. Use modal verb plus base form 'may be beautiful'. Also avoid redundant connectors 'but' and 'however' together. Suggestion: choose one connector and include 'be' after 'may'.

× MMM, it's difficult question.

✓ Hmm, it's a difficult question.

Missing article: 'difficult question' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also 'MMM' is an unnatural filler; use 'Hmm' if needed. Suggestion: add 'a' before the noun and limit filler sounds.

× I really love my country and views from it from my country, but I would like to see a lot of place in our world.

✓ I really love my country and the views from it, but I would like to see many places in the world.

Redundant phrase 'from it from my country' should be simplified to 'the views from it'. 'a lot of place' is uncountable/incorrect; use 'many places'. 'in our world' is better as 'in the world'. Suggestion: use 'many places' for countable plural and avoid repetition.

× For instance, I really love to travel to Portugalia because it's interesting place.

✓ For instance, I would really love to travel to Portugal because it's an interesting place.

Country name is 'Portugal', not 'Portugalia'. Use 'would really love to' to express desire and 'an interesting place' needs the article 'an' before the singular noun 'interesting place'. Suggestion: correct proper noun and include the article.