Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (singular/plural, articles) and use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., landscapes, scenery, candid family photos).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountain landscapes and sunsets because the light and colors are striking. Also, I like candid photos of my family to capture special moments together.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then two specific reasons with linking words (because, therefore). Avoid repetitive phrases and unclear final comment. Use correct grammar (plural forms, articles) and more precise vocabulary (countryside, greenery).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside and I find the greenery and open spaces very relaxing. For example, I enjoy walking through fields and looking at mountain ranges, which helps me feel calm and connected to nature.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give clear reasons with specific examples. Avoid vague expressions and awkward phrases; use correct collocations (natural scenery, mountain views, the breeze). Keep to two to three sentences and include one concrete example or memory.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal offers spectacular mountain scenery that I know well. For instance, I love standing on a hillside feeling the cool breeze while watching the Himalayan peaks at sunrise, which feels very special to me.

× I do love taking picture of different views, whether it is of beautiful nature, a garden or even a mountains or just a sunset or a small picture.

✓ I do love taking pictures of different views, whether they are of beautiful nature, a garden, mountains, a sunset, or small scenes.

The original sentence uses incorrect singular/plural forms: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'taking', and 'a mountains' is incorrect; use 'mountains' or 'a mountain'. Also 'it is' should agree with plural noun 'pictures', so use 'they are'. Combine items with consistent pluralization and parallel structure. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and maintain parallel structure in the list.

× I love taking picture.

✓ I love taking pictures.

The phrase 'taking picture' omits plural; after 'taking' use the noun in appropriate number. 'Taking pictures' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Use 'taking pictures' when speaking generally about the activity.

× I think my phone is filled with all this nature based thing.

✓ I think my phone is filled with all these nature-based things.

'Nature based' should be hyphenated as 'nature-based' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'all these'. Also 'this' should be 'these' for plural. Suggestion: Use 'these' for plural and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× However, I love taking pictures of myself and my family too, enjoying our moment, living together.

✓ However, I love taking pictures of myself and my family too, enjoying our moments and being together.

'Our moment' is awkward when referring to repeated or general occasions; use plural 'our moments'. 'Living together' is acceptable but 'being together' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: Use plural when referring to multiple occasions and choose idiomatic phrases.

× I prefer views in rural area since I grew up in rural area and moved to the city when I was just 10 years old.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas since I grew up in a rural area and moved to the city when I was just 10 years old.

Use 'rural areas' for general preference and 'a rural area' to describe where you grew up. Prepositions/articles with 'rural area' need 'a' for singular. Suggestion: Use 'in rural areas' for general statements and 'in a rural area' for a specific upbringing.

× So I love to visit and see the views of the rural area as it contains so much nature and greens.

✓ So I love to visit and see the views in rural areas, as they contain so much nature and greenery.

'The rural area' suggests a specific area; use 'rural areas' for generality. 'Greens' is nonstandard; use 'greenery' to refer to plant life. Also change 'it contains' to 'they contain' to agree with plural 'areas'. Suggestion: Use 'greenery' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× How I love it and that's how I love to see the view and I prefer.

✓ I really love it, and that's why I prefer those views.

Original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Rephrase for clarity: 'I really love it' and 'that's why I prefer those views' expresses the idea concisely. Suggestion: Avoid redundant fragments and use a clear cause-effect connector like 'that's why'.

× I think it's based on people.

✓ I think it depends on the person.

'Based on people' is unclear; the idiomatic expression is 'depends on the person' or 'depends on people'. Use singular 'person' when referring to an individual preference. Suggestion: Use 'depends on' for conditional opinions.

× I prefer views in my own country since living in context of Nepal, we got so many views of mountains and natures.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because, living in the context of Nepal, we have so many mountain views and natural landscapes.

Use 'because' or 'since' for reason but include commas for the clause. 'Living in context of Nepal' needs 'the' before 'context' and sounds unnatural; 'living in Nepal' or 'in the context of Nepal' is better. 'We got' should be 'we have' for present habitual, and 'natures' is incorrect — use 'natural landscapes' or 'nature'. Suggestion: Use present tense for general facts and correct noun phrases like 'mountain views' and 'natural landscapes'.

× I would love to go there, feel the moment, breeze in the wind and see the perfect naturey living wings and all these moments.

✓ I would love to go there, feel the breeze, enjoy the moment, and see the beautiful natural scenery and all those moments.

The original contains nonstandard or incorrect words: 'feel the moment' is awkward — 'enjoy the moment' is more natural; 'breeze in the wind' is redundant, use 'feel the breeze'; 'naturey living wings' is meaningless — replace with 'beautiful natural scenery'. Use parallel structure in the list. Suggestion: Use standard collocations and parallel verbs (go, feel, enjoy, see).