Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 구성과 어휘 선택에서 여러 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 명확한 주제 문장으로 바로 답하고 불필요한 중복을 피하세요. 예: 'Yes, I enjoy taking photos of views.' 그런 다음 이유를 구체적으로 제시하고 연결어(for example, because, so 등)를 사용하세요. 또한 단어 선택을 주의하세요(예: 'death scenes'는 부적절; 대신 'beautiful scenes' 또는 'memorable moments'). 발음을 개선하려면 짧고 간결한 문장으로 연습하고 여행 상황을 설명할 때 구체적인 예시(어디에서, 무엇을 찍었는지)를 덧붙이세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I like to capture beautiful scenes because they remind me of special moments. For example, when I travel I often take pictures of sunsets and landscapes so I can look back on them later.

Sugerencia: 답변은 본인의 선호를 말하려는 의도는 있으나 표현이 불명확하고 단어 선택 오류가 많습니다('Romeo obvious'는 의미 불명). 먼저 분명한 주제 문장으로 시작하세요(예: 'I prefer rural views'). 그 다음 구체적인 이유와 예시를 연결어로 이어 설명하세요. 또한 단어는 단수/복수와 관사 사용에 유의하고 자연스러운 어휘를 사용하세요(e.g., flowers, mountains, the sky, clouds, the moon).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because nature helps me relax. For example, I enjoy looking at flowers, mountains and the sky with clouds or the moon, which makes me feel peaceful.

Sugerencia: 문법과 어휘, 문장 논리 전개에 개선이 필요합니다. 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 예를 들어 'I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultures.'처럼 말한 뒤, 특정 지역(예: 'northern countries')을 언급하면 그 이유를 덧붙이세요(예: different architecture, landscapes, culture). 또한 관사와 단수/복수 형식을 정확히 사용하고, 'interested in' 뒤에는 명확한 대상이 와야 합니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because everything feels new and different. For example, I am fascinated by northern countries where the landscapes and culture are very different from my own, so I enjoy exploring those places.

× Yeah, a lie. Taking pictures when I looking at your place or views umm, because I want to capture the death scenes and I want to memorize it later.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of places or views because I want to capture the scenes and remember them later.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: fragmented phrases, incorrect verb form 'looking' after I (should be 'look' or rephrased), inappropriate word 'death' likely meant 'beautiful' or 'distant' (corrected to 'scenes'), and redundant clauses. Combine ideas into one clear sentence, use correct verb forms and vocabulary. Suggestion: avoid fragments, use 'I like taking pictures of...' and 'because I want to...' to form a complete sentence.

× For example, umm, when I go to travel I just take picture.

✓ For example, when I travel I just take pictures.

Use correct verb form and noun pluralization: 'go to travel' is unnatural; use 'travel' (simple present) for habitual actions. 'Take picture' needs plural 'pictures' for general meaning. Suggestion: say 'when I travel I take pictures' for clarity and correct grammar.

× Uh, I prefer Romeo obvious for example, like flowers or mountain or sky or cloud or moon because it makes me feel relaxed and I'm happy to see that.

✓ I prefer natural scenery, for example flowers, mountains, the sky, clouds, or the moon because they make me feel relaxed and happy to see.

'Romeo obvious' is meaningless; likely meant 'romantic' or 'natural'. Use plural nouns for general categories (mountains, clouds). 'It makes me' should agree with plural subjects -> 'they make me'. Use articles where needed ('the sky', 'the moon'). Suggestion: choose correct descriptive adjective and match verb number to the subject.

× I prefer in other countries because another countries that are faced something is all is all new things.

✓ I prefer other countries because everything there is new to me.

Incorrect preposition 'in other countries' after 'prefer' — use 'prefer other countries' or 'prefer being in other countries'. 'Another countries' is incorrect (another with plural), and 'that are faced something is all is all new things' is ungrammatical. Simplify to 'everything there is new to me.' Suggestion: use 'other' with plural nouns and clear subject-verb order.

× So I have more interested in that northern countries.

✓ So I am more interested in northern countries.

'Have more interested' is incorrect verb + adjective pattern; use 'be + interested'. 'That northern countries' wrongly uses demonstrative 'that' with plural; remove or use 'those'. Also 'northern countries' doesn't need 'the' here. Suggestion: use 'I am more interested in northern countries' or 'I am more interested in those northern countries' if specifying particular ones.