Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 内容明确但表达不够自然，存在犹豫语（umm）、语法错误和冗余。建议：1) 开头用一句直接的主题句回答问题；2) 删除填充词并用一到两句具体细节支持（拍摄目的、喜欢拍什么角度或元素）；3) 注意单复数与介词用法（e.g. "in new places" -> "at new places" 或 "in new restaurants"）。在练习时可先在脑中组织2-3要点再说话。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing scenes when I travel or visit new restaurants. For example, I like to capture the table setting and the restaurant's interior lighting to remember the atmosphere and to share with friends.

Sugerencia: 回答中有很多语法和用词错误，表达不连贯且有冗长和重复。建议：1) 用一两句直接表明偏好或说“两者都喜欢”；2) 用连词（however, while, because）连接比较点；3) 提供具体对比细节（例如建筑、绿地、氛围）并保持句子简短明确。练习时可先列出比较点再组织成句。

Ejemplo: I enjoy both, but if I had to choose, I'd pick rural views for their peaceful atmosphere. While urban areas impress me with modern architecture and lively streets, the countryside offers wide green fields and fresh air that help me relax.

Sugerencia: 答案含糊且有许多犹豫词与表达错误（例如“only face is 1”不清楚），缺乏流畅性和具体理由。建议：1) 直接回答并说明理由；2) 提供具体比较点（文化熟悉度、风景差异、旅行便利性）；3) 避免不必要的犹豫词，控制在最多三到四句内。练习时用简单清晰的句子陈述观点并给出一两个理由。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country at the moment because I'm more familiar with the places and it's easier to travel there. However, I also appreciate scenery abroad, especially when countries have very different landscapes or cultures.

× Yes, that's fine, especially when I go to travel or when I do umm, eat in a new places.

✓ Yes, that's fine, especially when I go travelling or when I eat in a new place.

句中“go to travel”用法不当，應使用“go + -ing”表示去做旅行：go travelling。短語“do umm, eat”多餘且語序不自然，直接用“eat”。名詞“places”與不定冠詞“a”不一致，應改為單數“a new place”。建議：使用“go + -ing”表动作，去掉多餘助動詞，注意單複數一致。

× In the new restaurant I would like to feature with the new views and new food and something like that.

✓ In the new restaurant I would like to feature the new views and new food, things like that.

原句中“feature with”搭配錯誤，正確為“feature”直接加賓語；“something like that”位置和形式不自然，改為“things like that”。建議：注意動詞搭配和名詞短語的自然排列。

× I think they both had a proud and crumbs.

✓ I think they both have their own pride and charm.

原句使用過去式“had”與上下文現在時不符，且“proud and crumbs”詞不達意（crumbs與語境不符）。改用現在時“have”並用“pride and charm”表達自豪與魅力。建議：保持時態一致並使用恰當詞彙表意。

× I liked the buildings in the urban cities, they showed the development of the society and also I love the rural areas which is surrounded by greeneries.

✓ I like the buildings in urban areas; they show the development of society. I also love the rural areas, which are surrounded by greenery.

時態和主謂一致有幾處問題：應與一般陳述保持現在時“like/show/love”。“urban cities”冗餘，改為“urban areas”或“cities”。關係從句中“which is surrounded”主語為“areas”，應用複數“are”。“greeneries”用法不自然，改為不可數名詞“greenery”。建議：使用一致的現在時，注意單複數一致並選擇常用名詞形式。

× You will feel more comforts and relaxing and me you will feel for like a more free.

✓ You will feel more comfortable and relaxed, and you will feel freer.

“more comforts”把形容詞誤用為名詞，應為形容詞“comfortable”。“relaxing”描述事物，需用過去分詞/形容詞“relaxed”表示人的感受。句中代詞與語序混亂（“me you will feel for like a more free”），改為清晰主語“you”並用比較級“freer”。建議：區分形容詞與名詞，確保副詞/形容詞位置正確，保持句子主語一致。

× Uh, that's kind of embarrassing because my only face is 1, uh, a border countries, which is Malaysia.

✓ Uh, that's kind of embarrassing because my only neighboring country is Malaysia.

原句結構混亂：“my only face is 1”沒有意義，應為“my only neighboring country”。“a border countries”數量和冠詞錯誤（單複數不匹配），且詞序不自然。建議：使用簡潔短語如“neighboring country”表達毗鄰國家，注意冠詞與單複數一致。

× Umm, for me, I think they're both beautiful, but right now as so far I preferred our own country views.

✓ Umm, for me, I think they're both beautiful, but so far I prefer the views of our own country.

原句“preferred”用過去式與“so far/right now”時間語境不符，應使用現在完成或現在時。改為現在時“prefer”。“our own country views”語序不自然，改為“the views of our own country”。建議：根據時間副詞選擇適合時態，保持詞序自然。