Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Good direct answer with clear reason and purpose. To improve, make the response more concise, avoid repetition, and add a brief specific example or a linking phrase to make it more natural. Keep sentences shorter (maximum 3–4) and use varied vocabulary (e.g. “capture,” “preserve,” “memories,” “remind me”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often photograph beautiful scenes because photos help preserve moments I might otherwise forget. For example, when I visit a seaside cliff, I take a photo to remember the light and colors, and later I can relive that feeling by looking at the picture.

Sugerencia: The answer starts well but contains a contradiction and a factual error (saying rural areas are congested with buildings). Clarify preference consistently, remove the contradiction, and add a linking word to explain reasons. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g. ‘peaceful,’ ‘open landscape’) and one short comparison sentence.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer peaceful, open landscapes with greenery and clear skies. In contrast, urban scenes tend to be crowded and dominated by buildings, so they rarely give the same sense of calm.

Sugerencia: Direct and personal answer with a good example. To improve, make the explanation more concise and add a linking phrase to contrast domestic familiarity with occasional enjoyment of foreign scenery. Use slightly richer vocabulary (e.g. ‘nostalgic,’ ‘familiarity,’ ‘occasionally’).

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and nostalgic. For instance, I often enjoy watching the sunset from my balcony with a cup of tea; however, I also appreciate striking landscapes abroad when I travel occasionally.

× That's why every time I see a beautiful view, I try to capture it so that whenever I want to recall the memories, I see the picture that I captured.

✓ That's why every time I see a beautiful view, I try to capture it so that whenever I want to recall the memory, I can look at the picture I captured.

Use 'can' to express ability in the present/future (modal verb for potential action) and 'memory' is uncountable here; also simplify 'see the picture that I captured' to 'look at the picture I captured' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer views in rural areas more than urban areas because you can experience the vast greenery, flowing river and the clear sky as a whole beautiful landscape.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas more than urban areas because you can experience the vast greenery, a flowing river and the clear sky as a single beautiful landscape.

Use indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'flowing river'. Also 'as a whole beautiful landscape' is unidiomatic; use 'as a single beautiful landscape' or 'as a whole' but not both. This fixes preposition/article use and improves clarity.

× On the contrary, in rural areas it feels more congested due to the buildings and offices and you cannot really feel the beauty of nature in here.

✓ On the contrary, in urban areas it feels more congested due to the buildings and offices, and you cannot really feel the beauty of nature here.

The original sentence incorrectly referenced 'rural areas' when meaning 'urban areas' (logical error) and used 'in here', which is ungrammatical; 'here' or 'in this place' is correct. Also add comma before 'and' to join clauses. This fixes subject-verb/reference and prepositional usage.

× I prefer views in my country more than other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my country more than in other countries.

When comparing locations, include the preposition 'in' before 'other countries' for parallel structure: 'in my country' vs 'in other countries'.

× As I was born and brought up here, the scenery is more familiar to me and it feels more sentimental.

✓ As I was born and raised here, the scenery is more familiar to me and it feels more sentimental.

'Brought up' is acceptable but 'raised' is more concise. No plural issue strictly, but 'sentimental' describes feelings; better: 'it feels more personal' or 'it holds more sentimental value' to correctly express the idea. Suggest replacing 'feels more sentimental' with 'holds more sentimental value' for clarity.