Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., articles and verb forms). Include a brief reason or example to make the answer concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture sunsets and mountain scenery because the colors and lighting are beautiful, and they help me practise composition. I also take candid photos of friends to record memories.

Sugerencia: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar. Begin with a direct preference, then support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words like “abuse” and fix repetition and contractions.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside is greener and the air feels fresher. For instance, I enjoy photographing terraced fields and quiet rivers, which give more natural colours and peaceful scenes than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Use a complete, grammatical sentence that directly answers the question, then add specific supporting details. Mention your experience and, if relevant, a reason why you prefer your country or would like to visit others. Correct verb forms and avoid run-on sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I have explored many beautiful places in Nepal. For example, I have photographed mountain ranges and rivers in my region, and the dramatic landscapes and local culture make these scenes especially memorable.

× Yes, this is my hobby to take pictures of different views like I love.

✓ Yes, taking pictures of different views is my hobby.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundant phrases ('this is my hobby to take... like I love'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Reordering the clause so the gerund phrase 'taking pictures of different views' is the subject clarifies meaning and removes redundancy. Suggestion: use gerund phrases as subjects ('Taking pictures... is my hobby').

× I love sunset, sunrise and the mountain views and beaches and rivers.

✓ I love sunsets, sunrises, mountain views, beaches, and rivers.

List items should be plural when speaking generally (singular/plural issue ID 1) and items should be separated by commas for clarity (sentence structure error ID 26). Also use plural nouns for general preferences. Suggestion: use parallel structure and commas in lists.'

× I love taking pictures of my friends.

✓ I love taking pictures of my friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The verb + -ing form is used correctly to express a liking for an activity. No change needed.'

× I love the abuse of the rural areas 'cause it it is fresh green.

✓ I love the beauty of rural areas because they are fresh and green.

Original uses 'abuse' incorrectly (word choice error falling under sentence structure/problems ID 26) and repeats 'it'. Also 'rural areas' is plural so use 'they are' (subject-verb agreement ID 27) and adjectives should be in a natural order. Suggestion: replace 'abuse' with 'beauty', remove repetition, use 'because', and match plural subject with plural verb.'

× I never been to the other countries but I went to some places of our country and our country is Nepal and it there are so many beautiful mountains and rivers, I love taking picture of them and.

✓ I have never been to other countries, but I have been to some places in my country. Our country is Nepal, and there are so many beautiful mountains and rivers. I love taking pictures of them.

Multiple errors: 'I never been' needs present perfect ('I have never been') to express life experience (past tense issue ID 5). 'I went to some places of our country' is better as 'I have been to some places in my country' (present perfect). 'Taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (singular/plural issue ID 1). Sentence fragmentation and comma splices are sentence structure errors (ID 26). Suggestions: use present perfect for life experiences, use 'in my country' rather than 'of our country', and split into clear sentences.