Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and natural but a bit disorganized and contains hesitations and minor grammar issues. Aim to give a concise topic sentence, then one or two supporting reasons using linking words. Reduce fillers (uh) and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., 'I find it a bit of a hassle'). Also try to vary vocabulary (e.g., 'capture photos' vs 'take pictures').

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy taking photos of views; I prefer to enjoy the moment instead. Besides, I don't own a high-quality camera or a good phone, so taking pictures often feels like more trouble than it's worth.

Sugerencia: The response answers the question directly and gives reasons, but has grammar errors and repetition. Use accurate grammar ('there are not so many buildings', 'there is a lot of greenery') and avoid repeating the main idea. Add a linking word for coherence and one specific example to strengthen the answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because there are fewer buildings and much more greenery, such as fields and farms. For example, I enjoy watching rolling hills and patchwork fields, which feel more peaceful than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Good to give a clear preference and reasons, but the answer is long-winded and has grammar and word-choice issues ('not that much' -> 'not as high', 'maintained themselves' -> 'better maintained'). Break into two sentences, use linking words (however, because) and provide a concrete example of what you mean by 'better maintained'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because population density and crowded roads at home make many places feel chaotic. For instance, in some European towns the streets are cleaner and parks are better maintained, which makes the scenery more pleasant.

× To be honest, I'm not really into photography, rather I would prefer uh, enjoying the moment or getting into photography is not my cup of tea.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really into photography; rather, I prefer enjoying the moment, and getting into photography is not my cup of tea.

The original mixes 'would prefer enjoying' and awkward clause order. 'Would prefer' requires a base verb or 'to' + verb (I would prefer to enjoy) but here the simple present 'I prefer enjoying' is more natural for a general preference. Also separate ideas with a semicolon or conjunction to improve clarity.

× Plus I also don't have a very good quality camera or phone, so I find a bit, uh, hassle.

✓ Plus, I also don't have a very good-quality camera or phone, so I find it a bit of a hassle.

Missing article 'it' and missing preposition 'of' in the phrase 'a bit of a hassle.' Also 'very good quality' should be hyphenated as 'very-good-quality' or better 'very good-quality' as an adjective before a noun; here 'very good-quality camera' or simply 'a good-quality camera' is correct.

× I prefer views of rural areas because in rural areas there is not so many buildings over there, plus there is a greenery and so many farms are also there.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because there are not so many buildings, plus there is greenery and many farms.

Use plural verb 'there are' with plural noun 'buildings' (subject-verb agreement). 'A greenery' is incorrect because 'greenery' is uncountable and does not take 'a.' Also reduce redundancy ('over there') and use 'many farms' instead of 'so many farms are also there.'

× So I would prefer the views of rural area.

✓ So I would prefer the views of rural areas.

'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match earlier mention and general preference; definite article 'the' is unnecessary unless referring to specific area, but keeping 'the views of rural areas' is natural. Alternatively 'I would prefer rural views.'

× I prefer views of other countries because in our country the population is quite high and here the roads are also quite bustling and in other countries the population is not that much and I would also say that they have maintained themselves better than my country.

✓ I prefer views from other countries because in our country the population is quite high and the roads are quite busy, while in other countries the population is not as large, and I would also say that they maintain themselves better than my country does.

Use 'not as large' rather than 'not that much' for comparing population size (comparative structure). 'Roads are bustling' is acceptable but 'busy' is more natural. 'They have maintained themselves better than my country' needs a verb at the end for clarity: 'better than my country does.' Avoid 'the population is not that much' as ungrammatical.