Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevap doğal ama biraz düzenlenmeye ve netliğe ihtiyaç duyuyor. Konu cümlesi var fakat fazladan tekrarlar ve dolgu sözcükleri bulunuyor. Detayları daha özgül hale getirin (örneğin hangi manzaralar ve neden) ve cümleleri 3–4 cümle ile sınırlandırın. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) ile fikirleri daha akıcı bağlayın. Ayrıca 'it fills me relaxed' yerine doğru ifade kullanın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of mountains and rivers because their textures and colors are very calming. I usually share these photos with friends to cheer them up and to keep memories of peaceful places.

Sugerencia: Cevap doğrudan ve mantıklı bir tercih sunuyor, fakat dolgu kelimeleri ('uh', 'umm') ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları dikkati dağıtıyor. Cümleyi daha kısa ve net kurun; örnekler verin ve nedeni açıkça belirtin. Bağlaçlar (because, for example, especially) kullanarak akışı iyileştirin.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I find natural scenery more peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing sunrises over mountains and reflections in rivers, which feel more inspiring than crowded city scenes.

Sugerencia: Cevapın anlamı belli ama bazı kelime hataları ve anlamsal karışıklık var ('wheels' yanlış kelime). Cümleyi basit ve doğru kelimelerle yeniden kurun, bir veya iki özgül örnek verin ve nedenini netleştirin. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve 2–3 cümleyle sınırlandırın.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I’m curious about different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I’d love to capture coastal cliffs in Portugal or traditional streets in Japan, which are very different from what I see at home.

× Yes, absolutely. I love taking pictures of different views like mountains, rivers, beach or sun and moon and generally I prefer to share with my friends because it is it fills me relaxed and less stressful.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I love taking pictures of different views, like mountains, rivers, beaches, the sun and the moon, and generally I prefer to share them with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and less stressed.

The sentence has multiple conjunction and article issues: 'beach or sun and moon' should be parallel and take plural/article forms (beaches, the sun, the moon). 'share with my friends' needs an object 'them'. The phrase 'it is it fills me relaxed and less stressful' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'it makes me feel relaxed and less stressed'. Use parallel lists and correct verb + object structure. Improve by keeping list items parallel, using articles where needed, and using 'make + someone + adjective' for feelings.

× To be honest, I prefer uh to uh view of rural areas because generally I always curious about the natural scenery uh, such as mountains, river, umm, sunrises and moonlight.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views of rural areas because I am generally curious about natural scenery, such as mountains, rivers, sunrises and moonlight.

Errors include missing plural 'views' and 'rivers', and incorrect verb/predicate 'I always curious' which needs the verb 'am' to form the adjective complement. Also 'generally' should modify the verb phrase 'am curious' so word order is adjusted. Remove filler sounds. Improve by ensuring noun plurals match the list, include the verb 'to be' with adjectives, and place adverbs before the adjective phrase.

× Actually I prefer wheels in in other countries because I always curious about different cultures, different landscapes and scenery of other countries and the I think seeing and taking photo.

✓ Actually I prefer to travel to other countries because I am always curious about different cultures, landscapes and scenery, and I enjoy seeing and taking photos there.

'I prefer wheels in in other countries' is unintelligible; likely intended 'prefer to travel to other countries'. 'I always curious' lacks the verb 'am'. 'the I think seeing and taking photo' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I enjoy seeing and taking photos there'. Also use plural 'photos' and add 'there' to refer to other countries. Improve by using clear verbs ('prefer to travel', 'enjoy') and correct verb forms and plural nouns.