Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise, and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), correct verb forms and plural/singular, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different places because they help me remember my travels. For example, I photograph landmarks and local scenes so I can share them with my family and friends and remember special moments.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or explain why you like both with one coherent sentence. Use linking words (however, although, and) and remove repetition. Be specific about what you photograph in each setting.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views. For instance, I enjoy urban photography for the architecture and street scenes, while rural areas attract me with natural landscapes; photographing both helps me relax and stay creative.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and word choice, avoid fillers, and make your reason specific and concise. Use a topic sentence and one or two supporting details with a linking word like “because” or “so.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me see new landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting Spain and Japan gave me fresh perspectives and helped me relax so I returned home feeling refreshed and motivated.

× Yes, I like take picture, uh, of a different views, uh, which in order to make my, uh, my memorize for a different place that I visit.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views to help me remember the different places I visit.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the -ing form 'taking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' because multiple views are implied (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Which in order to make my, my memorize' is ungrammatical; use an infinitive purpose clause 'to help me remember' and 'memorize' should be the verb 'remember'. Also 'a different place' should be 'the different places' to match meaning.

× At the same time, I can, uh, share this with my friends and my relatives or family That's make me more funny.

✓ At the same time, I can share them with my friends and relatives, and that makes me happier.

Replace 'this' with 'them' to match plural 'pictures' (Grammar Problem Type 12). 'Relatives or family' is redundant; use 'relatives' or 'family'. 'That's make' is wrong; subject-verb agreement requires 'that makes' (Grammar Problem Type 27). 'More funny' is not the intended meaning; 'happier' or 'more joyful' is appropriate (Grammar Problem Type 13).

× I prefer both. Both there are more interesting for me urban area.

✓ I prefer both urban and rural areas because both are interesting to me.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and redundant 'both' usage (Grammar Problem Type 26). Reorder to 'I prefer both urban and rural areas' and use 'because both are interesting to me' for clarity. 'For me' should be 'to me' (preposition correction, Grammar Problem Type 11).

× I like the nature and I like to. I like to make photos of the views of urban area.

✓ I like nature, and I like to take photos of urban views.

'The nature' is incorrect article usage; use 'nature' without 'the' (Grammar Problem Type 22). 'I like to.' is incomplete—remove it. 'Make photos' is understandable but 'take photos' is the correct collocation (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'The views of urban area' should be 'urban views' or 'views of urban areas' to match number (Grammar Problem Type 1).

× That's helped me to be more relaxed.

✓ That helps me to be more relaxed.

Present simple question about general preference requires present simple verb 'helps' not past participle 'helped' (Grammar Problem Type 2). Use 'that helps' to indicate a habitual or general effect.

× I prefer in other country because I like to travel around the world and I wait to see a different views from a different countries.

✓ I prefer other countries because I like to travel around the world and I want to see different views from different countries.

Do not use 'prefer in'; say 'prefer other countries' (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'I wait to see' is incorrect verb choice; use 'I want to see' (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'A different views' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'different views' (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'A different countries' is wrong; use 'different countries' (Grammar Problem Type 1).

× Uh, that's helped me to, uh, refresh my mind and make me more relaxed, uh, in order to, uh, back, uh, with a strong.

✓ That helps me refresh my mind and makes me more relaxed so I can come back feeling strong.

Use 'helps' and 'makes' for present habitual effect (Grammar Problem Type 2 and 6). 'Refresh my mind' is correct, but maintain consistent verb forms: 'helps me refresh' and 'makes me more relaxed'. 'In order to back with a strong' is ungrammatical; use 'so I can come back feeling strong' for clear purpose and correct wording (Grammar Problem Type 26).