Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant phrases and unclear expressions (e.g. "breath of fish air"), and limit response to around 2–4 sentences. Use one or two specific supporting details (what kinds of scenes, when you take photos) and a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. I especially like scenic landscapes such as mountains and coastal sunsets because their colours and light change often. For example, I take photos during early morning walks to capture soft light and calm reflections.

Sugerencia: Good clear preference and a specific example. Improve by tightening language, using linking words (e.g. "because" and "for example") properly, and adding one concrete detail (time, particular feature, or result) to make the answer more vivid and natural. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer abundant greenery and wide open spaces that feel peaceful. For example, when I visited my family’s farmhouse last summer, I photographed rows of mango trees and a small pond at dawn, which produced beautiful reflections.

Sugerencia: Correct idea but grammar and coherence need work. Begin with a clear topic sentence (state your preference), give one concise reason and a short example. Avoid vague comparisons and repeated adjectives; use accurate tense and natural phrasing.

Ejemplo: I prefer views I saw in Australia. I visited Australia in 2024 and was impressed by its dramatic coastlines and wide national parks, which felt more varied and striking than scenery I’d seen at home.

× I think that I am fascinated by the views around me and I love clicking pictures of different types of views I see they tend to be scenic pictures key and also those scenes which are like a breath of fish air to me and I absolutely enjoy clicking them and keeping it in my memories.

✓ I am fascinated by the views around me and I love taking pictures of the different scenes I see; they tend to be scenic and feel like a breath of fresh air to me, and I absolutely enjoy photographing them and keeping them in my memories.

Multiple adjective and word-choice errors: 'clicking pictures' is informal and unidiomatic; use 'taking' or 'photographing'. 'Different types of views I see' is wordy; simplify to 'different scenes I see'. 'scenic pictures key' appears incorrect and likely a typo; use 'scenic'. 'a breath of fish air' is a misused adjective ('fish' should be 'fresh'). Also adjust repetition and article use for clarity. Suggest using concise phrasing and correct collocations like 'a breath of fresh air' and 'keep them in my memories'. ID:13

× I am more attracted towards views in rural areas because the rural areas are filled with lot of greenery, open spaces and immense natural areas.

✓ I am more attracted to views in rural areas because they are filled with a lot of greenery, open spaces, and vast natural areas.

Plural and article issues: 'filled with lot of greenery' is missing the article 'a'. Repetition 'the rural areas' then 'rural areas' is awkward; replace second mention with 'they'. Also prefer 'vast' or 'extensive' over 'immense' for collocation with 'natural areas'. Suggest using 'attracted to' rather than 'attracted towards'. ID:1

× For instance, I visited one of my farm house and I thoroughly enjoyed the greenery and the trees and I loved clicking pictures all over.

✓ For instance, I visited my farmhouse and I thoroughly enjoyed the greenery and the trees, and I loved taking pictures everywhere.

Preposition and compound-noun issues: 'one of my farm house' is incorrect—use 'my farmhouse' or 'one of my farmhouses'. 'Clicking pictures all over' is unidiomatic; use 'taking pictures everywhere' or 'all around'. Also add commas to separate clauses. Suggest using 'farmhouse' as a single word and correct prepositional phrases. ID:11

× I travel to Australia in the year 2024 and I prefer the views in the country of Australia because I felt it has more breathtaking spaces, it is more beautiful and it is more captivating to the eyes and my.

✓ I traveled to Australia in 2024, and I prefer the views there because I felt they were more breathtaking, more beautiful, and more captivating to my eyes.

Tense and agreement issues: 'I travel to Australia in the year 2024' should be past tense 'I traveled to Australia in 2024' when recounting a past trip. 'I prefer the views in the country of Australia' is wordy; use 'there' or 'in Australia'. 'I felt it has' mixes past and present; change to 'I felt they were' to agree with plural 'views' and past tense. 'Captivating to the eyes and my' is incomplete; correct to 'captivating to my eyes'. Suggest keeping tenses consistent when telling past experiences and matching subject-number with verbs. ID:5