Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar mistakes, avoid redundancy, and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word if adding the detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of scenic views. For example, when I visited Lake Baikal I photographed the shoreline at sunrise and posted the best shots on Instagram to share the experience with friends.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference and avoid contradictions. Start with a clear topic sentence stating which you prefer, correct vocabulary errors ("rumour" -> "rural"), and give one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "however"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. However, I also appreciate rural areas for their clean air and peaceful landscapes, so I often visit both when I can.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. State your preference clearly, give one or two concrete reasons or examples, and remove awkward phrasing (e.g., "the best views"). Use a linking word like "because" or "for example."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes and historical architecture here feel familiar and meaningful to me. For example, the old streets and rivers in my city create memorable scenes that I enjoy photographing.

× Yes, absolutely, I adore it to taking pictures of different breathtaking views and I like to post it in my Instagram to share with others the places I have visited and got some likes or comments.

✓ Yes, absolutely, I adore taking pictures of different breathtaking views, and I like to post them on my Instagram to share the places I have visited and get some likes or comments.

Error: incorrect verb pattern and pronoun/preposition use. 'Adore' is followed by the gerund (verb + -ing), so use 'adore taking' not 'adore it to taking'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'pictures' and preposition 'on' for social media. Also maintain parallel verbs: 'share... and get', not 'share... and got'. Suggestion: use gerunds after verbs like 'adore', match pronouns to their antecedents, use correct prepositions for platforms, and keep verb tense consistent.

× I prefer mainly rumour areas because I love the rush of the city.

✓ I mainly prefer urban areas because I love the rush of the city.

Error: wrong word 'rumour' (spelling/word choice) and awkward preposition/word order. The intended word is 'urban' (not 'rumour'). Also place the adverb 'mainly' before the verb for natural word order: 'I mainly prefer urban areas.' Suggestion: check spelling and put adverbs in typical positions.

× However, I also like rural areas for its quality of air and some kinds of use.

✓ However, I also like rural areas for their quality of air and for various uses.

Error: incorrect pronoun agreement: 'rural areas' is plural, so use 'their' not 'its'. 'Some kinds of use' is awkward; 'various uses' or 'different purposes' is clearer. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their nouns and use natural collocations.

× But mostly it is urban areas.

✓ But mostly I prefer urban areas.

Error: awkward and ungrammatical structure 'it is urban areas' where 'it' does not refer properly. Better to state preference directly: 'I prefer urban areas.' Suggestion: make subject and verb match clearly; avoid dummy 'it' when referring to plural nouns.

× Yes, I like visiting some interesting place.

✓ Yes, I like visiting some interesting places.

Error: singular/plural mismatch: 'some' implies plural, so use 'places' not 'place'. Suggestion: match determiners ('some') with plural nouns.

× I definitely prefer views in my country.

✓ I definitely prefer views in my country.

No correction needed. Present simple correctly expresses a general preference. Keep as is.

× I live in Russia and I was always drawn to Slavic countries because they have the best views and the best quality of air and I think my city has breathtaking views sometimes.

✓ I live in Russia, and I have always been drawn to Slavic countries because they have the best views and the best air quality, and I think my city sometimes has breathtaking views.

Error: tense and verb form. 'Was always drawn' implies a past state; use present perfect passive 'have always been drawn' to show a continuing tendency up to now. 'Quality of air' is more naturally 'air quality'. Rearranged 'sometimes' to its normal position. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions or states that continue to the present, use natural noun phrases like 'air quality', and place adverbs like 'sometimes' close to the verb.