Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 전개를 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 하고, 불필요한 중복과 지나친 음성 중지를 줄이세요. 주제문으로 직접 답한 뒤 구체적인 예시(어떤 풍경, 어떤 장면을 선호하는지)와 이유(어떤 감정이나 목적 때문에 찍는지)를 2~3문장으로 덧붙이세요. 또한 문장 연결을 위해 연결어(for example, because, so 등)를 정확히 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph both natural landscapes like mountains and forests and architectural scenes such as historic buildings. I like to do this because taking photos helps me remember the moment and notice small details I might otherwise miss.

Sugerencia: 답변을 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 불필요한 반복과 음성채우기(um, uh)를 피하며, 낮과 밤의 대비를 더 논리적으로 연결하고 마무리 문장을 완성하세요. 예를 들어 'I prefer urban views because...; additionally,...' 같은 연결구를 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views to rural ones. During the day I enjoy the patterns of skyscrapers and busy streets, and at night the city lights create a beautiful atmosphere. Also, urban areas offer a variety of architectural styles that I find interesting to photograph.

Sugerencia: 국가 이름과 이유를 정확한 어휘로 표현하고 문법 오류(주어-동사 일치, 관사 등)를 고치세요. 'good grades' 같은 부적절한 표현 대신 'scenery'나 'landscape' 등 맥락에 맞는 단어를 사용하세요. 간단한 비교 구조('I like... but I prefer... because...')로 명확히 말하세요.

Ejemplo: I like the views in Korea because they combine modern cities and beautiful nature. However, I also admire scenery in countries like Switzerland and Canada, where the mountain landscapes and lakes are especially striking.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses the verb + -ing form after 'like'. Suggestion: None.

× Uh, for example, I like to take picture both in the nature and also the both nature and architecture.

✓ For example, I like to take pictures both of nature and of architecture.

The original sentence has multiple problems: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (count noun) and the preposition structure is incorrect ('take pictures of'). The phrase 'both in the nature and also the both nature and architecture' is redundant and ungrammatical. Suggestion: use parallel structure 'both of A and of B' and pluralize 'pictures'. Grammar problem type ID: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× Uh, when I take a picture I can look at them after so I think it is good.

✓ When I take pictures, I can look at them afterwards, so I think it's good.

Errors: singular 'a picture' conflicts with plural 'them'; use plural 'pictures' to match 'them'. 'After' should be 'afterwards' or 'after that' for clarity. Add comma before 'so'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number agreement and use appropriate adverb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 9 (Verb in the past participle form) and 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× Umm, I prefer views in, uh, specially urban area because, umm, at the daytime I can see lots of high buildings and at the time, at night time I can see lots of buildings with, uh, their lights on.

✓ I especially prefer views in urban areas because during the daytime I can see many tall buildings, and at night I can see lots of buildings with their lights on.

Problems: 'specially' should be 'especially' (word choice). 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' for general preference. 'at the daytime' is incorrect; use 'during the daytime' or 'in the daytime'. 'high buildings' is better as 'tall buildings'. 'at the time, at night time' is redundant; use 'at night'. Suggestion: use correct adverb 'especially', correct prepositional phrases, and plural forms for general statements. Grammar problem type ID: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× So I think it's very.

✓ So I think it's great.

The original sentence is incomplete; 'very' requires a following adjective (very good/interesting/etc.). Suggestion: complete the clause with an appropriate adjective to express the opinion. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I like the views in Korea but I also like views in other countries like Swiss or Canada because both countries has a very good grades since so I like it.

✓ I like the views in Korea, but I also like views in other countries like Switzerland or Canada because both countries have very good scenery, so I like them.

Multiple issues: country name 'Swiss' is the adjective; use 'Switzerland' for the country. 'both countries has' is subject-verb agreement error; use 'have'. 'a very good grades' mixes singular article with plural 'grades' and is unclear; likely meant 'very good scenery' or 'landscapes'. 'since so I like it' is ungrammatical; use 'so I like them' or 'so I enjoy visiting them'. Suggestion: use correct country names, ensure subject-verb agreement, choose appropriate noun (scenery/landscapes), and use coherent connectors. Grammar problem type ID: 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors) and 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) }]} PMID:0`} PMID:0)