Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然並直接回應問題，避免時態錯誤和多餘填充詞（如“umm”）。開頭用一個明確的主題句表達喜好，然後用一到兩句具體細節支持，如描述喜歡拍什麼類型的景色和拍照給你帶來的好處。注意語法（例如用現在時："Yes, I do"或"Yes, I enjoy it"）並減少重複。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I particularly like photographing landscapes and cityscapes because they capture unique light and atmosphere. Taking photos also helps me improve my composition and technical skills.

Sugerencia: 回答應更精簡流暢並用連接詞把理由組織起來，避免過多的“umm”。提供更具體的細節或比較以支持偏好，例如提到城市景觀的特定元素（摩天大樓、夜景、建築風格）並簡短說明為何吸引你。

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing skyscrapers and vibrant streets. Urban scenes show architectural details and lively activity, which create interesting contrasts and dynamic compositions.

Sugerencia: 回答應更有條理並避免語序或詞匯錯誤（例如“the Great Wall beaches”不通順）。先給出立場，再列舉兩到三個具體例子並簡短說明每個例子的特色，最後總結原因。使用連接詞使表述連貫。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse scenery. For example, we have majestic mountains and historic sites like the Great Wall, as well as beautiful beaches and modern cities. These familiar landscapes make me feel proud and more connected to my homeland.

× Yes I did, and it's a really good chance for me to see beautiful views of the landscapes and of our country or umm, taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I do, and it's a really good chance for me to see beautiful landscapes and views of our country, and to take pictures.

句子使用的时态不一致。考官问的是一般习惯性喜好（现在时），学生却用了过去式“I did”，应使用一般现在时“I do”。此外原句中短语顺序和动词形式混乱（“or umm, taking pictures”应改为并列不定式“and to take pictures”）。建议用一般现在时谈论习惯，并把动词不定式用于目的或并列结构。

× A great chance for me to practice my photograph skills.

✓ A great chance for me to practice my photography skills.

此处名词搭配错误。英语中表示摄影技巧应使用名词“photography”而不是形容词“photograph”接复数名词。应将“photograph skills”改为“photography skills”。建议记住常用名词搭配，photography skills = 摄影技巧。

× Umm I prefer views in urban areas because I like tall buildings and shopping malls.

✓ I prefer urban views because I like tall buildings and shopping malls.

原句中“views in urban areas”表达冗长且重复，句子更自然的结构是“I prefer urban views”。简化句子结构使表达更连贯。建议用更简洁的名词短语替代冗长介词短语。

× Umm, I think it's a really good way to show the prosperity of a city and umm, the crowded people also.

✓ I think it's a good way to show a city's prosperity and its crowded streets/people.

原句结构不完整，“and ... the crowded people also”不是正确并列结构，应改为并列的名词短语或名词所有格（a city's prosperity）并明确“crowded people”可替换为“crowded streets”或“crowded population”。建议用并列结构并保持名词短语的一致性。

× I really prefer views in my own country because our country has many beautiful views like great mountains, the Great Wall beaches and the cosmopolitan cities.

✓ I really prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful places, like great mountains, the Great Wall, beaches and cosmopolitan cities.

原句列举项之间缺少逗号和连词，且“The Great Wall beaches”把“the Great Wall”和“beaches”错误连写在一起。应把“The Great Wall”单独列出，并将“views”改为“places”更自然。建议在列举多项时正确使用逗号并单独列出每一项。

× I think it's a great way for us to better look at our own country.

✓ I think it's a great way for us to appreciate our own country better.

原句“to better look at our own country”中“不定式 + 副词 + 动词”顺序和搭配不自然，应用更常见的表达“appreciate ... better”或者“to see/learn more about our own country”。建议使用自然搭配的动词短语（appreciate, learn about, see more of）。