Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 首先，你的回答有明确的肯定，但语法和用词有明显错误，影响理解。建议： 1) 修正语法和时态（例如："my mom is a photographer before" 应为 "my mom was a photographer"）。 2) 使用清晰的主句与支持句，控制在3-4句内；避免不必要的词（如 "in my tiger" 可能是误说）。 3) 加入简短具体的细节说明为什么喜欢拍照（例如拍风景、记录记忆或学习摄影技巧）。 4) 使用连接词使句子流畅，例如 "because", "so", "and"。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. My mother was a photographer, so she taught me basic techniques and inspired me to try taking pictures. I enjoy capturing landscapes because they help me remember places and practice composition.

Sugerencia: 回答思路正确但表达混乱。建议： 1) 先给出直接回答（例如："It depends on my mood."），然后用一到两句具体说明不同情况下的选择。 2) 注意时态和人称（如 "If I was that" 应为 "If I want to relax" 等）。 3) 使用连接词清楚对比（如 "however", "on the other hand"）。 4) 控制句子长度，避免重复和模糊词（如 "various" 用法不当）。

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood. If I want peace and quiet, I prefer rural areas because they are calm and scenic. However, when I want excitement and to hang out with friends, I enjoy urban areas with cafes and lively streets.

Sugerencia: 这段回答含混且有明显用词错误（如 "ghost"）。建议： 1) 直接回答问题（例如："I like both" 或者 "I prefer..."），避免出现与题意无关的词。 2) 用一至两句具体说明原因：为什么喜欢本国的风景（情感、记忆）以及为什么想去国外（多样性、不同文化）。 3) 使用恰当的连接词（如 "not only... but also"）并注意语法完整性。

Ejemplo: I like both, but for different reasons. I admire views in my country because they remind me of home and family. At the same time, I want to see beautiful places abroad to experience new cultures and diverse scenery.

× Yes, of course, because my mom is a photographer before so in my tiger he always teach me how to take beautiful pictures and I was willing to try.

✓ Yes, of course. My mom was a photographer before, so when I was a child he always taught me how to take beautiful pictures and I was willing to try.

句子中有多处过去时用法错误和词语拼写/搭配问题：1) “is a photographer before”时态混用，表示过去应使用过去时“was a photographer”。2) “in my tiger”是拼写/词语错误，应为“when I was a child”或“in my childhood”。3) “he always teach me”主语为第三人称单数且发生在过去，应使用过去时第三人称单数“taught”。整体建议：把明确发生在过去的动作用过去时；注意单复数与人称一致；使用正确短语表达“童年/小时候”。（建议改写示例已给出）

× Maybe, it's hard to say, it depends on my mood at the moment. If I was that I really want to find some place very quiet, but if I want to make me fun and I just want to play my with my friends, maybe I like various.

✓ Maybe, it's hard to say. It depends on my mood at the moment. If I really want to find somewhere very quiet, I would choose that; but if I want to have fun and just play with my friends, I might prefer more varied places.

句子时态和语气混乱：1) 条件句应区分真实与非真实情况。原句“If I was that I really want to find”结构不正确，非真实现在/将来常用“If I really want to…”或“If I wanted to…”。2) “make me fun”是错误用法，正确表达为“have fun”。3) “play my with my friends”多余代词，应为“play with my friends”。4) “maybe I like various”用词不当，改为“prefer more varied places”。建议：根据语境选择合适的条件句时态（真实情况用现在时，假设用过去时/情态动词），用常见搭配（have fun；play with），并用恰当形容词表达“多样的地方”。

× That's a good question. My answer is ghost. I like some ghosts. Not only I like my country's beautiful views because it is my hometown, but also I want to see diversity, beautiful places abroad.

✓ That's a good question. My answer is: I like both. Not only do I like my country's beautiful views because it is my hometown, but I also want to see diverse and beautiful places abroad.

代词与表达不当：1) “My answer is ghost. I like some ghosts.”不合语境，可能是想表达“两者都喜欢”或“既喜欢国内也喜欢国外”。应改为“I like both”或类似表述。2) “Not only I like... but also I want...”在‘not only... but also’结构中，动词常需倒装或在从句中保持一致，正确为“Not only do I like... , but I also want...”或“不仅...而且...”。3) “see diversity, beautiful places abroad”措辞不自然，改为“see diverse and beautiful places abroad”。建议：用清晰代词表达意图，注意“not only... but also...”的语序和动词一致，并用恰当形容词排列。