Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary; give one clear topic sentence then 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (plural/singular, article use, word choice). Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and avoid redundant phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photography helps me record special moments. For example, when I visit a scenic spot, I usually take solo photos to remember the atmosphere and later share them with friends. This way I can relive the experience and show others what the place felt like.

Sugerencia: Make a clear direct statement first (urban or rural), then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (verb agreement, articles) and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary (countryside, rural, busy, crowded). Keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside often has mountains and waterfalls that feel peaceful. For example, when I visit rural areas I can enjoy quiet landscapes and fresh air, whereas cities are usually crowded and noisy.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear stance (depends or prefer one), then explain reasons with specific examples and correct grammar (word order, articles, prepositions). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrasing. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends, but I usually prefer views in my own country because I live near mountains. For instance, every morning I can see the mountain and breathe fresh air, which makes local scenery feel especially peaceful and familiar.

× Absolutely, I love taking picture of the beautiful view because for the coffee help me capture scenery and pleasure memory.

✓ Absolutely, I love taking pictures of beautiful views because they help me capture scenery and pleasant memories.

Errors: 'taking picture' needs plural 'taking pictures' because general hobby uses plural (Rule: noun pluralization). 'the beautiful view' -> 'beautiful views' for generalization. 'for the coffee help me' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'they help me' referring to pictures; use appropriate subject-verb agreement. 'pleasure memory' should be 'pleasant memories' (adjective 'pleasant' and plural noun). Suggestion: Use plural nouns for habitual actions, match pronouns to antecedents, and use correct adjectives.

× For example, when I visit a synthetic spot, I always take the solo photo so I can remember the atmosphere and share it with my friends later.

✓ For example, when I visit a scenic spot, I always take solo photos so I can remember the atmosphere and share them with my friends later.

Errors: 'synthetic spot' is incorrect word choice; use 'scenic spot'. 'take the solo photo' -> 'take solo photos' (plural for habitual action and adjective order). 'share it' should be 'share them' because plural 'photos' is antecedent. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and ensure pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent.

× Well, it's depend.

✓ Well, it depends.

Error: Third-person singular present requires -s: 'it depends' not 'it depend'. Suggestion: Add -s to verbs when subject is he/she/it in present simple.

× I would say I prefer more the rural area rather the countryside rather than the in the city one because I've peppered that the countryside have a good landscape of the mountain and the waterfall instead of the busy side is quite busy for a crowded building and even the.

✓ I would say I prefer rural areas or the countryside rather than the city because the countryside has good landscapes like mountains and waterfalls, while the city is crowded with buildings.

Multiple errors: 'prefer more the rural area rather the countryside rather than the in the city one' is ungrammatical and redundant; simplify to 'prefer rural areas or the countryside rather than the city'. 'I've peppered' is incorrect word; likely 'I've observed' or 'I prefer' but context fits 'the countryside has' (subject-verb agreement). 'the countryside have' -> 'the countryside has' (singular collective noun). Remove trailing fragment. Suggestion: Use clear comparative structure 'prefer X rather than Y', ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct verbs ('has', 'is') and vocabulary ('landscapes').

× I would say I prefer more the rural area rather the countryside rather than the in the city one because I've peppered that the countryside have a good landscape of the mountain and the waterfall instead of the busy side is quite busy for a crowded building and even the.

✓ I would say I prefer rural areas or the countryside rather than the city because the countryside has good mountain and waterfall scenery, while the city is crowded with buildings.

Error: 'the countryside have' should be 'the countryside has' (subject 'countryside' is singular, so verb must be singular). Also 'the busy side is quite busy for a crowded building' is awkward; rewrite to 'the city is crowded with buildings'. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with singular/plural subjects and simplify phrasing.

× I will say it depends, but I cannot say I people in the place that I my country because where the place that I live is located next to the mountain.

✓ I would say it depends, but I cannot say I prefer the places in my country because where I live is next to the mountains.

Errors: 'I will say' is acceptable but 'I would say' fits hypothetical preference. 'I cannot say I people in the place that I my country' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I prefer the places in my country'. 'where the place that I live is located next to the mountain' should be 'where I live is next to the mountains'. Suggestion: Use concise phrasing, correct verb forms, and proper word order: 'where I live is next to the mountains'.

× When you get up in the morning, you can straight away see the mountain with a full of the fresh air together at the atmosphere.

✓ When you get up in the morning, you can immediately see the mountains and enjoy the fresh air and atmosphere.

Errors: 'see the mountain' may be okay if singular, but plural 'mountains' fits earlier change; remove 'a full of the fresh air' which is incorrect; use 'enjoy the fresh air and atmosphere'. 'straight away' can be replaced by 'immediately'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('enjoy the fresh air'), correct article usage, and concise adverb placement.