Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., 'and yeah'), correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'wherever I go' → 'wherever I go' but fix surrounding words), and limit to ≤5 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you like to photograph and why to enrich the answer. Use linking words such as 'so' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views; photography is my main hobby. I always carry my camera or smartphone wherever I go because I enjoy capturing scenes that remind me of a place. For example, I especially like photographing sunsets and city skylines because the colours and light change quickly, and I can keep those moments as memories.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first (e.g., 'I like both') then provide two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Fix hesitations and repetitions, use precise vocabulary ('architecture', 'landscapes'), and complete the second idea rather than trailing off. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views. In cities I enjoy photographing architecture and busy streets because the shapes and details are interesting. On the other hand, I also like rural landscapes for their natural colours and peaceful atmosphere, which help me capture calm, timeless images.

Sugerencia: Answer directly using present simple ('I prefer') and avoid fillers ('yeah, you know'). Give a specific example of what is different abroad (architecture, food markets, landscapes) and explain why that appeals to you. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to make the response coherent and informative.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering places I haven't seen before. For example, I love photographing traditional markets and historic buildings abroad since they offer unique colours and details I don't have at home, which makes my travel photos more interesting.

× And yeah, I always bring my camera when wherever I go and taking pictures and maintaining them as my precious memory in my like phone, iPhone.

✓ And yeah, I always bring my camera wherever I go, take pictures, and keep them as precious memories on my phone (iPhone).

The original sentence incorrectly mixes clause structures: 'bring... when wherever I go and taking pictures' misuses the -ing form and creates a fragment. Replace 'when wherever I go and taking pictures' with 'wherever I go, take pictures' to use parallel simple present verbs after 'I always'. Use 'keep' instead of 'maintaining' for a more natural verb and plural 'memories' to match multiple pictures. Use 'on my phone' for correct preposition use. Suggestion: use parallel verbs in lists and maintain consistent verb forms (I always do X, Y, and Z).

× I like both honestly sometimes I feel like taking pictures of like something human made like buildings or like architectures but on on opposite I sometimes prefer going to like.

✓ I like both. Honestly, sometimes I feel like taking pictures of man-made things, such as buildings or architecture, but on the other hand I sometimes prefer going to natural places.

The original sentence has repeated fillers ('like', 'on on') and an incorrect/conflated conjunction 'on on opposite'. Replace with the correct conjunctive phrase 'on the other hand' to show contrast. Also replace 'something human made' with 'man-made things' and 'architectures' with uncountable 'architecture'. Complete the thought by specifying 'natural places' rather than leaving it unfinished. Suggestion: avoid filler words, use correct contrast connectors, and ensure parallel/complete clauses.

× I preferred views in other countries because that's, yeah, you know, there are so many things I've never experienced or I've never seen.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because there are so many things I have never experienced or seen.

The original uses 'preferred' (past) while the context is a general preference, so present simple 'prefer' is correct. Also condense 'I've never experienced or I've never seen' to 'I have never experienced or seen' for naturalness. Remove filler 'that's, yeah, you know'. Suggestion: match tense to the general/ongoing preference (use present simple), and avoid unnecessary repetitions and fillers.

× So I liked, I like experiencing new things, so I prefer them.

✓ I like experiencing new things, so I prefer them.

The sentence contains 'I liked' (past) and then 'I like' (present), causing tense inconsistency. Since the speaker expresses a current preference, use present tense throughout: 'I like experiencing new things.' Then 'so I prefer them' is acceptable; ensure consistency by removing 'I liked'. Suggestion: maintain consistent present tense for current preferences and avoid switching tenses unnecessarily.