Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีคำพูดที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหลายจุด ควรตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วให้รายละเอียดรองที่เป็นเหตุผลหรือคำอธิบายที่ชัดเจน ใช้คำศัพท์ที่เกี่ยวข้องกับการถ่ายภาพ (เช่น scenery, composition, lighting) และหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่ยาวเกินไปหรือคำที่ไม่สมเหตุสมผล ฝึกจัดเรียงความคิดให้มีโครงสร้าง: 1) ตอบตรงๆ 2) ให้เหตุผล 3) ยกตัวอย่างสั้นๆ

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing cityscapes because I like the architectural details and the way light reflects off buildings. For example, I often capture evening shots when the sunset creates interesting colors and shadows. This helps me practice composition and timing.

Sugerencia: คำตอบไม่ตอบตรงคำถามและมีคำหรือวลีที่ไม่สอดคล้องกัน ควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคที่ชัดเจนว่าชอบชนบทหรือเมือง แล้วให้เหตุผลที่เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น บรรยากาศ แสง สี หรือรายละเอียดของวิว ใช้ linking words (for example, because, while) เพื่อเชื่อมความคิดและจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4-5 ประโยค

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because nature offers more varied colors and peaceful scenes. For instance, the blue sky and golden fields create beautiful contrasts that are great for photos. While cityscapes can be interesting, I find countryside light and textures more appealing.

Sugerencia: คำตอบขาดความชัดเจนและไม่ได้ตอบว่าในประเทศหรือประเทศอื่น ๆ โดยตรง ควรเริ่มด้วยการระบุความชอบ แล้วให้เหตุผลที่เฉพาะเจาะจงเกี่ยวกับปัจจัยเช่น แสง วัฒนธรรม หรือทิวทัศน์ ยกตัวอย่างสถานที่หรือช่วงเวลาที่แสงดี ใช้ประโยคสั้น ๆ และเชื่อมด้วย linking words เช่น because, for example

Ejemplo: I prefer taking photos in my country because the tropical light here is very strong and vivid. For example, in Thailand the morning and late-afternoon light brings out bright colors in landscapes and markets. However, I also enjoy photographing abroad when I visit places with different architectures and cultures.

× I like the postage of the city and I also like the post of 2004.

✓ I like the postures of the city and I also like the photos from 2004.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and agreement. 'Postage' refers to mail stamps/costs, not pictures; 'post' is ambiguous. Use 'postures' only if referring to poses, but likely 'photos' is intended. Ensure plural 'photos' to match 'I like'. Suggestion: choose the correct noun 'photos' and use plural when referring to multiple images.

× So Mozart might be still with realized the the this time of sales and I feel specific and focusing on that directly, but it's the launchpad mostly and also I really like because I prefer.

✓ So I might still focus on this series of shots from that time, and I feel very specific and focused on them, but mostly I like it because I prefer that style.

The original sentence is incoherent and has poor structure. Replace unclear fragments ('Mozart', 'realized the the this time of sales', 'launchpad') with clear phrases that match the intended meaning. Maintain subject-verb connections ('I might still focus', 'I feel...focused'). Advice: simplify sentences, state one idea per clause, and use parallel structures.

× How to perform a very happy with Maryland because I like the nature of the combination between blue and gold and sandwiches much more better than the grey from the city's paper and the urban settings I don't know, I don't like the.

✓ I'm very happy with Maryland because I like the natural combination of blue and gold much more than the grey of the city's buildings and urban settings; I don't really like those.

Original has incorrect phrase 'How to perform', misplaced adjectives, and 'much more better' (redundant comparative). Fix sentence structure: use 'I'm very happy with', 'much more than' (not 'much more better'), and replace 'city's paper' with 'city's buildings' or 'cityscape'. Advice: avoid redundant comparatives and keep adjective order logical.

× I carefully feel often at a time this week you can say I think the light is really effective to the peak pressure as well.

✓ I often feel that this week the light is very effective at creating strong contrast.

Original mixes adverbs awkwardly ('carefully feel often at a time') and uses 'effective to the peak pressure', which is incorrect. Use present tense simple 'I often feel' and a clear object: 'effective at creating strong contrast'. Advice: place adverbs close to verbs and use correct preposition ('effective at').

× So they've I've had lots of kids that I believe in Thailand, the light is become much more strong.

✓ So I've had many experiences in Thailand; the light there became much stronger.

Original mixes contractions and tenses ('they've I've had'), and 'become much more strong' is incorrect word order and comparative form. Use present perfect 'I've had' for experiences and simple past 'became' to describe change. Use 'much stronger' instead of 'more strong'. Advice: avoid double contractions and use correct comparative adjective order.

× So I prefer taking a photo or then stay photos come to play and.

✓ So I prefer taking photos rather than staying still; I like when photos come alive.

Original is unfinished and unclear ('stay photos come to play and'). Clarify intent: contrast 'taking photos' with 'staying still' or similar. Complete the sentence and use parallel structure. Advice: finish clauses and avoid dangling conjunctions.