Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and natural by correcting grammar and reducing redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "build life that Remember Me."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph mountains and forests because their scale and colors remind me of the place; these photos help me relive the moment later.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and use linking words to compare the two choices. Correct grammar (plural/singular, tense) and avoid repeating words. Give one clear reason for each preference.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. In cities, I photograph cafes, restaurants and public gardens because their lively atmosphere reflects social life; by contrast, in rural areas I prefer woodlands and farms, which are calming and full of natural textures.

Sugerencia: Use consistent tense and clearer linking between ideas. Give specific examples of scenes at home and abroad, and explain briefly why they interest you. Replace vague phrasing like "teaches about the environment" with a concrete reason.

Ejemplo: I enjoy scenery both at home and abroad for different reasons. At home, I photograph historical towns and festival scenes that show our traditions and architecture; abroad, I focus on mountains and coastlines because they offer different light and textures that challenge my composition skills.

× Yes, I like to capture pictures of different views when I travel to different places and I like to click pictures of mountains and also nature and build life that Remember Me the moment where I visited.

✓ Yes, I like capturing pictures of different views when I travel to different places, and I like to take pictures of mountains and nature that remind me of the moments I visited.

Original sentence misuses infinitive and gerund forms inconsistently ('like to capture' and 'build life that Remember Me'). Use 'like capturing' or 'like to capture' consistently; 'click pictures' is informal—use 'take pictures'; 'build life that Remember Me the moment where I visited' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with 'that remind me of the moments I visited' to convey memory. Also fix capitalization and word order.

× I prefer both for views in urban area and rural area.

✓ I prefer both views in urban areas and rural areas.

Missing plural and incorrect article use: 'urban area' and 'rural area' should be plural when speaking generally. Removing 'for' and using plural 'areas' makes the sentence natural: 'I prefer both views in urban areas and rural areas.'

× In urban areas I like to capture pictures of cafe, restaurant and gardens where I I enjoyed with my friends and in rural area I like to capture Woodlands and agriculture farms which makes me feel fresh.

✓ In urban areas, I like taking pictures of cafes, restaurants, and gardens where I have enjoyed time with my friends, and in rural areas I like to capture woodlands and agricultural farms which make me feel refreshed.

Multiple issues: use plural nouns ('cafes, restaurants'); 'like to capture' -> 'like taking' for consistency; 'where I I enjoyed' has double 'I' and wrong tense—use present perfect 'have enjoyed' to link past enjoyment to present. 'Woodlands' should be lowercase; 'agriculture farms' is incorrect—use 'agricultural farms' or simply 'farms'. Subject-verb agreement: 'farms which make me feel refreshed' (plural 'farms' requires 'make'). 'Feel fresh' is awkward; 'feel refreshed' is more natural.

× I enjoyed both the scenery in my own country and other countries.

✓ I enjoy both the scenery in my own country and in other countries.

The question is general/habitual preference, so present simple 'enjoy' is appropriate rather than past 'enjoyed'. Also add 'in' before 'other countries' for parallel structure.

× In my home, I appreciate landscape that reflect our tradition and culture, such as historical towns and festivals.

✓ At home, I appreciate landscapes that reflect our traditions and culture, such as historical towns and festivals.

'In my home' is better as 'At home' for speaking about one's country; 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'reflect'; 'reflect' must be plural agreement with 'landscapes' so use 'reflect'; 'tradition' should be plural 'traditions' to match 'culture'.

× While abroad, I like to capture the natural scenery, mountains and coastline that teaches about the environment.

✓ While abroad, I like to capture natural scenery, mountains, and coastlines that teach me about the environment.

Agreement and clarity issues: 'coastline' should be plural 'coastlines' to match list; relative clause 'that teaches' must agree with plural antecedent, so use 'teach'; add 'me' after 'teach' to clarify the object. Also remove 'the' before 'natural scenery' for general reference.