Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn; tránh lặp từ và câu quá dài. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh, cảm xúc) và kết thúc ngắn gọn. Chú ý động từ, mạo từ và sắp xếp từ (ví dụ: “that is would” → “that would”; “save is a memories” → “save as memories”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do, but it depends on the place. When I visit new countries, I like to photograph breathtaking scenery such as mountain ranges or coastal views because they remind me of the trip. I then save the best shots in an album to look back on later.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, sửa lỗi phát âm/viết từ và ngữ pháp, và hoàn thành ý chưa kết thúc. Tránh các lỗi như “wife” (có lẽ muốn nói “views”) và lặp từ “urban cities urban areas”. Dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer rural views), rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ hợp lý và kết luận ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are calmer and greener. For example, when I visited my grandparents’ village, I walked through nearby fields to relax, and the quiet atmosphere and fresh air helped me unwind after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời không trực tiếp so sánh trong cùng câu (own country vs other countries) và lặp nội dung từ câu trước. Cần trả lời rõ ràng câu hỏi so sánh (một câu chủ đề) rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo ngữ pháp (ví dụ “go for work around the nearby field” → “go for a walk in the nearby fields”).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views in my own country because they are familiar and comforting. For instance, when I returned to my grandparents’ hometown, walking in the green fields and breathing fresh air helped me relax much more than sightseeing in busy foreign cities.

× I think that is would depend on the place that I go.

✓ I think that would depend on the place that I go.

The phrase contained an unnecessary extra auxiliary 'is' before the modal 'would'. Remove 'is' to form the correct modal construction 'would depend'. Use 'would' to indicate conditional or hypothetical situations. Grammar problem type ID:4

× I would take that advantage to take some photos of the scenery around there, which is really breathtaking or stunning and then save is a memories in my album.

✓ I would take advantage of the opportunity to take some photos of the scenery there, which is really breathtaking or stunning, and then save them as memories in my album.

Multiple issues: incorrect collocation 'take that advantage' should be 'take advantage of'; unnecessary word 'around' is awkward so use 'there'; 'save is a memories' has wrong pronoun and article/number — use 'save them as memories'. Also add commas to separate clauses. This correction addresses verb and noun phrase usage and pronoun agreement. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I think that I will prefer the wife in rural area.

✓ I think that I will prefer the life in rural areas.

The original sentence likely had a typo 'wife' instead of 'life' and missed plural/plural article: use 'rural areas' for general preference or 'the rural area' for specific. Use 'the life' or simply 'rural life'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I remember when I came back to my grandparents hometown which is far from the urban cities urban areas and then to relax my mind I decided to go for a work around the field nearby and it was really helped me relax because of the.

✓ I remember when I came back to my grandparents' hometown, which is far from urban areas, and to relax I decided to take a walk around the nearby fields, and it really helped me relax.

Problems: missing possessive apostrophe in 'grandparents', redundant 'urban cities urban areas', incorrect phrase 'go for a work' should be 'take a walk', 'field nearby' should be 'nearby fields', and 'it was really helped me relax because of the.' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Reorder phrases for clarity and correct verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I think that I prefer the vibe in rural area.

✓ I think that I prefer the vibe in rural areas.

Use plural 'rural areas' to refer generally; alternatively 'the rural area' if specific. No present participle issue in meaning but corrected number for natural usage. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I remember when I came back to my grandparents hometown which is quite far from the urban areas.

✓ I remember when I came back to my grandparents' hometown, which is quite far from the urban areas.

Add possessive apostrophe in 'grandparents'' and comma before the relative clause for correct punctuation and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I decided to go for work around the nearby field and really found that the greens and the peaceful scenery as well as the fresh air really helped me relax after a busy day.

✓ I decided to go for a walk around the nearby fields and found that the greenery, the peaceful scenery, and the fresh air really helped me relax after a busy day.

Use 'go for a walk' not 'go for work' and 'around the nearby fields' (plural) is more natural; replace 'the greens' with 'the greenery' or 'green fields'. Remove duplicate 'really' for conciseness and ensure parallel structure in the list. Grammar problem type ID:11