Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um, my friend), correct verb forms and plural nouns, and keep to 2–3 sentences. Add one specific example of what you enjoy photographing to make the answer concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes and candid moments, and my friends often ask me to take photos because I have a good eye. For example, I like capturing sunrise scenes at the local park with my Sony camera.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, use accurate vocabulary (greenery, natural atmosphere), avoid repetition, and finish your thought. Use one linking phrase to add a supporting reason and one specific detail or short example.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are greener and have a more peaceful, natural atmosphere. For instance, I like photographing fields and rivers in the countryside, as they offer colorful scenes and interesting natural patterns.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid vague comparisons or awkward phrasing. Use correct grammar for comparisons (cleanliness in France is better than in India) and give one specific reason or example about scenery or urban design rather than general comments about people. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and city designs. For example, when I visited France, I noticed well-maintained streets and tidy public spaces, which made photographing architecture and parks very enjoyable.

× Yes uh, absolutely my friend.

✓ Yes, absolutely, my friend.

This phrase lacks a verb but functions as a discourse marker; however the original punctuation and filler 'uh' should be removed for clarity. Use commas to set off the vocative 'my friend'. Suggestion: omit fillers and use proper punctuation for clarity.

× I am known as a good photographer in my friend circle, so I was I also like to taking picture of good movements and sceneries and I also I have a Sony camera.

✓ I am known as a good photographer in my friend circle, so I also like taking pictures of interesting moments and sceneries, and I have a Sony camera.

Multiple issues: unnecessary repeated words ('I was I also', 'I also I'), incorrect verb form 'to taking' (should be 'taking' after 'like'), singular/plural 'picture' should be 'pictures', and awkward phrase 'good movements' corrected to 'interesting moments'. Remove redundancy and keep parallel structure. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use 'like + -ing' correctly, and use plural when referring to multiple photos.

× I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas are more greenery and it gives a natural vibe and because of this artificial and modern SO world there is no greeneries in this urban areas so I like to capture a picture of.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have more greenery and give a natural vibe; in contrast, the artificial and modern world in urban areas has less green space, so I like to capture pictures there.

Errors: 'are more greenery' is ungrammatical—use 'have more greenery' or 'are greener'; 'gives' should agree with plural subject 'they' so 'give'; 'greeneries' is incorrect pluralization (use 'greenery' uncountable) and extraneous 'in this' removed; sentence fragment 'so I like to capture a picture of' incomplete—specify 'pictures there'. Suggestion: use correct agreement, treat 'greenery' as uncountable, keep sentence complete and concise.

× Yes, uh, I uh, prefer views, uh, in other country.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in other countries.

Article missing before 'country' and singular/plural mismatch: to express preference generally use plural 'other countries' or use 'another country'. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: say 'in other countries' for general preference or 'in another country' for a single country.

× And I recently visited uh, to uh, France though, and I then I realized the, uh, the clean, uh, cleanliness of people and the hygienic of the, uh, their country are much more better than India.

✓ I recently visited France, and I realized that the cleanliness and hygiene of their country are much better than in India.

Errors: unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'visited' (visit + place, not 'visit to'); remove fillers and duplicate words; 'the clean, cleanliness of people and the hygienic of the, their country' is incorrect word choice—use 'cleanliness and hygiene' referring to the country; subject-verb agreement: 'cleanliness and hygiene ... are'; comparative 'much more better' is incorrect (double comparative)—use 'much better' or 'far better'; include 'in' before 'India'. Suggestion: use 'visit' without 'to', choose correct nouns 'cleanliness' and 'hygiene', and use 'much better' for comparison.