Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers and unclear names, correct grammar (e.g. "the interesting moments","share them with my friends"), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph historic buildings and mountain vistas because they remind me of the trip. Also, I edit a few of my favourite shots and share them with my friends so we can talk about our experiences.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and coherently: correct vocabulary ("views" not "wave"), avoid sentence fragments, and use linking words to expand (e.g. "because" or "so"). Provide specific examples and one brief reason. Keep under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I like the peaceful scenery. For example, I enjoy walking through traditional villages surrounded by green trees and colourful flowers, which helps me relax. Therefore, I often choose countryside trips when I want to unwind.

Sugerencia: Make a clear, grammatically correct statement: say whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, explain why with a specific reason, and avoid unclear place names and fillers. Use linking words (e.g. "because", "so") and one concrete example. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I have not travelled abroad yet and I know many beautiful local places. For example, I visited a nearby region called Drago where I saw clear green lakes and blue skies, which made the trip memorable. Because of this, I enjoy exploring more sites at home.

× It helps me to remember the interesting moment and I can share it to my friends.

✓ It helps me remember the interesting moments and I can share them with my friends.

Use of prepositions: 'remember' does not need 'to' after 'helps me'; 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match general meaning (singular/plural issue); 'share ... to' is incorrect — use 'share ... with'. Also replace the noun reference with 'them' to avoid repetition.

× I prefer the wave in rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful landscapes with green trees, colorful flowers and traditional villages.

✓ I prefer the view in rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful landscapes with green trees, colorful flowers, and traditional villages.

Word choice: 'wave' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'view'. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. This preserves present-tense preference.

× For example. Why visit village? I feel really excited.

✓ For example, when I visit a village, I feel really excited.

Fragment and article use: 'For example.' is a fragment and 'Why visit village?' is unclear and ungrammatical. Combine into one complete sentence. Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'village' and use present simple 'visit' for habitual action.

× Actually, I enjoy the way we in our country because I never been to another country and I go to Drago for traveling.

✓ Actually, I enjoy the way we live in our country because I have never been to another country and I go to Drago for traveling.

Multiple tense and verb form issues: 'the way we in our country' is missing verb 'live'. 'I never been' requires present perfect 'I have never been' to indicate life experience. 'Go to Drago for traveling' is awkward but kept; consider 'I go to Drago to travel' or 'I traveled to Drago' depending on meaning.

× I saw the beautiful landscapes with green lakes, uh, green trees and blue.

✓ I saw beautiful landscapes with green lakes, green trees, and blue skies.

Incomplete noun phrase: 'and blue' is incomplete—likely 'blue skies'. Add 'skies' to complete the list and include commas for list clarity. Past tense 'saw' is correct for a past observation.