Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No plus reason), avoid filler words and repetition, correct grammar (e.g., “I love taking pictures”), and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, where and what you captured). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I enjoy nature. For example, last month I visited Shimla with friends and photographed snow-covered mountains and pine forests. Those photos captured the contrast of light and shadow and remind me of the trip.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific reasons without repetition. Use clear linking words (because, so) and concise vocabulary. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘people do not face health issues’), and provide one specific example of what you like in rural views (fields, fresh air).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the air is fresher and the surroundings are quieter. For instance, I like walking by green fields and rivers where there is less traffic and pollution, so it feels healthier and more relaxing.

Sugerencia: Be precise and avoid hesitation sounds (uh). Give a clear reason and add one specific supporting detail or example (a place or season). Use a linking word (because, for example) and correct grammar (e.g., ‘every country has its own environment’). Keep under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more familiar and comfortable there. For example, I enjoy visiting local hill stations during the rainy season with friends, when the scenery is lush and pleasant. I also appreciate local customs and landscapes that I know well.

× Being a nature person, so I love to taking pictures of different views.

✓ As a nature person, I love taking pictures of different views.

Original contains redundant conjunction 'so' after a participial phrase and incorrect verb form 'to taking' (mix of infinitive 'to' and gerund). Remove 'so' and use either 'to take' or the gerund 'taking'. 'As a nature person' is a clearer introductory phrase.

× I really remember last month I went to Shimla with my friends.

✓ I clearly remember that last month I went to Shimla with my friends.

The sentence needs a reporting verb with clear time reference. Use 'clearly remember' or 'I remember that' to link present memory to a past event. The past tense 'went' is correct; adding 'that' or 'clearly' improves clarity.

× So that time I captured a lot of views which are which was very beautiful and enhance enhance the enhance the.

✓ At that time I captured many beautiful views.

The original has redundant fillers ('so that time', repeated phrases, and mixed verb forms 'are' and 'was') and repetitions 'enhance'. Simplify to correct sentence structure: use 'At that time' and 'captured many beautiful views.' Avoid repetition and ensure subject and verb agree.

× I always prefer views in rural areas where the environment is very neat and clean and also people people cannot face health issues which has which has detrimental for their health.

✓ I always prefer views in rural areas where the environment is neat and clean and people do not face health issues that are detrimental to their health.

Original repeats words ('people people') and uses incorrect verb structure 'cannot face' and 'which has detrimental'. Use 'do not face' for negative present simple and 'that are detrimental to their health' to correctly modify 'health issues'. Remove redundancy.

× I always prefer views in my own country because the environment is very, uh, neat and clean.

✓ I always prefer views in my own country because the environment is neat and clean.

Remove filler 'uh' from a written response and redundant adverb 'very' if unnecessary. The present simple 'prefer' matches the general preference.

× Uh, I can say I can enjoy the environment with my friends in rainy seasons.

✓ I can enjoy the environment with my friends during the rainy season.

Avoid filler 'uh'. Use 'during the rainy season' or 'in the rainy season' for natural timing. Use singular 'the rainy season' or 'rainy seasons' depending on meaning; 'during the rainy season' is most natural here.

× So I think every country have their own environment and the views.

✓ So I think every country has its own environment and its own views.

Subject 'every country' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'has' (subject-verb agreement). Use singular possessive 'its' instead of 'their'. For parallelism, repeat 'its own' before 'views' or restructure to 'its environment and views.'