Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and word order (e.g., “I have enjoyed photography since childhood” not “I I have found”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel or meet friends I often take pictures to capture memories, and I have liked doing this since childhood because it makes me happy.

Sugerencia: Give a single clear topic sentence and expand with a connected reason using linking words. Avoid sentence fragments and repeat ideas. Add one specific detail or example to make your answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the atmosphere is calmer and the air is fresher than in the city. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields and small villages since their colors and quietness are very relaxing.

Sugerencia: Make your main point directly, then support it with clear reasons and examples. Avoid fillers like “well” and incomplete sentences. Explain how foreign landscapes broaden your horizons with a specific example or explanation.

Ejemplo: I prefer landscapes in other countries because seeing different natural scenes exposes me to new cultures and scenery. For example, photographing coastal cliffs abroad taught me new composition ideas and inspired me to try different lighting and angles.

× Yes, I always like to take photos, especially when I'm gathering with friends or traveling.

✓ Yes, I always like to take photos, especially when I'm getting together with friends or traveling.

The verb phrase 'gathering with friends' is uncommon in this context; native speakers say 'get together with friends' or 'gather with friends' but 'gathering with friends' sounds awkward. Also ensure present continuous 'I'm getting together' fits the habitual context; here both 'I get together with friends' or 'I'm getting together' are acceptable. Suggested correction uses a more natural collocation.

× I I have found that since I was a child.

✓ I have felt that way since I was a child.

The original has repetition 'I I' and uses 'have found that since I was a child' which is awkward: 'since' requires a state continuing from past to present, so use present perfect with a state verb like 'have liked' or 'have felt'. 'Have found' can be used but must be followed by an object; 'felt that way' is clearer. Correction removes duplicated 'I' and uses a correct present perfect construction.

× That brings me happily.

✓ That makes me happy.

'That brings me happily' is ungrammatical: 'bring' with an adverb does not convey emotional state. Use 'make' plus adjective 'happy' to express causing an emotion. Also 'happily' is an adverb, while the verb 'make' requires an adjective complement.

× I prefer views in rural areas because the atmosphere is very different from the place I live and also I'd like to enjoy the fresh air.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the atmosphere is very different from where I live, and I also like to enjoy the fresh air.

The clause 'different from the place I live' is acceptable but wordy; 'different from where I live' is more natural. 'I'd like to enjoy' suggests a future or hypothetical; since the speaker is stating a general preference, simple present 'I also like to enjoy' is more consistent. Also added comma and conjunction for clarity.

× In the countryside.

✓ I prefer the countryside.

'In the countryside.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject. It appears intended to state preference, so correct to a full sentence 'I prefer the countryside.' This provides subject and verb and fits the question context.

× I prefer landscapes in other countries because I like to. Well and natural landscapes which may broaden my horizon.

✓ I prefer landscapes in other countries because I like natural scenery, which may broaden my horizons.

The original is disfluent and fragmented: 'because I like to. Well and natural landscapes' is not grammatical. Combine ideas into one sentence: 'because I like natural scenery' (more natural than 'landscapes' repeated) and use a relative clause 'which may broaden my horizons.' Note 'horizons' is usually plural. Remove filler 'Well and' and complete the verb phrase after 'like.'