Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your reply did not answer the examiner's question and instead asked a question back. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a short, natural answer (1–2 sentences), and avoid asking questions. Give a clear opinion and, if helpful, one brief reason or example. Keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because I like capturing colours and atmosphere, for example city skylines at sunset or rural landscapes in the morning.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and does not address the question. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference (urban or rural), then add one specific reason using linking words (because, so, for example). Avoid invented words and ensure vocabulary is appropriate and meaningful.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more picturesque, so I can take photos of natural scenery like fields and rivers without many people around.

Sugerencia: This answer directly addresses the question and gives a reason, which is good. To improve, make the language more precise and natural: use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific example or detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences with a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often have landscapes and architecture that are different from my own country. For example, I enjoy seeing coastal cliffs or alpine villages that I can't find at home, which makes travelling and photographing much more interesting.

× I prefer musical areas because it's a small fresh.

✓ I prefer rural areas because it is small and fresh.

The student used 'musical' incorrectly instead of 'rural' (word choice error) and combined 'small fresh' which is ungrammatical. This falls under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs. Use appropriate adjectives: 'small' and 'fresh' must be joined by a conjunction: 'small and fresh'. Also expand contraction to 'it is' for clarity. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective ('rural') and connect coordinate adjectives with 'and' or use a comma if more natural.

× I prefer fields in other countries because in other countries I can see a lot of things that I can't see in my current country.

✓ I prefer fields in other countries because I can see many things there that I cannot see in my country.

The sentence repeats 'in other countries' unnecessarily and uses 'a lot of things' which is less formal than 'many things'; this is an issue with pronoun/place reference and style. Replace the repeated phrase with the pronoun 'there' to avoid redundancy and change 'my current country' to 'my country' for naturalness. Also expand contraction 'can't' to 'cannot' for formality and clarity.