Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak with correct grammar and clearer word choice. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect verb forms (e.g., "adore taking", not "adore to taking"). Replace vague words like "safeful" with "safe" or "calm". Keep the answer to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax. For example, photographing a quiet park or a sunset makes me feel calm and focused. Also, looking back at these photos reminds me of pleasant moments.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct sentence structure. Say "I prefer urban areas" and give a clear reason with a linking phrase like "because" or "as". Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "vibrant" or "authentic") and avoid awkward phrases like "feeding my soul" unless clarified. Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., "there are more realistic views" is incorrect here).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the vibrant street scenes and architecture. For example, city skylines and busy markets provide interesting subjects to photograph and inspire me creatively.

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatical. Start with "I prefer views in my own country" then give a specific reason and one brief example. Fix grammar ("my country has many trees") and avoid trailing, incomplete phrases. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful natural areas. For example, there are coastal scenes and forests near my town that are perfect for photography and relaxing walks.

× Yes, I adore to taking pictures of different views due to a these pictures feel me feel more comfortable and more safeful.

✓ Yes, I adore taking pictures of different views because these pictures make me feel more comfortable and safer.

Adore is followed directly by the gerund (verb+ing), not an infinitive with to, so 'adore to taking' should be 'adore taking'. 'Due to' is used before nouns; here a conjunction 'because' is needed to introduce a clause. 'a these pictures' mixes an unnecessary article with a demonstrative; use 'these pictures'. The verbs 'feel me feel' are incorrect: English uses a causative or active construction 'make me feel'. 'Safeful' is not a standard word; use the adjective 'safer' (comparative) to mean more safe. Suggestion: practice verbs that are followed by gerunds and common causative expressions like 'make someone feel'.

× I prefer to urban areas because of there was a more realistic views and this is more feel like a feeding my soul.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have more realistic views, and they feel more like they feed my soul.

The verb 'prefer' when followed by a noun does not use the preposition 'to' before the noun phrase; say 'I prefer urban areas' or 'I prefer urban areas to rural areas'. 'Because of' requires a noun phrase after it; here a clause is needed so use 'because'. 'There was a more realistic views' has multiple issues: 'there was' is wrong for plural 'views' and subject-verb agreement is wrong; use 'they have more realistic views' or 'there are more realistic views'. 'This is more feel like a feeding my soul' mixes forms: use 'they feel more like they feed my soul' or 'it feels like food for my soul'. Suggestion: review prepositions with 'prefer' and forming reason clauses with 'because', and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× I prefer to in my countries because my countries is a real have a lots of trees and and there was a a scene like a sea or other nice views so peoples have a.

✓ I prefer my country because it really has lots of trees and scenes like the sea and other nice views, so people enjoy it.

Pronoun and noun forms are incorrect: 'countries' should be singular 'country' if referring to the speaker's own country; use 'my country' and the pronoun 'it' to refer back. 'I prefer to in my countries' misuses the preposition 'to' and plural 'countries'; correct is 'I prefer my country' or 'I prefer staying in my country'. 'My countries is a real have a lots of trees' has subject-verb agreement and extra words; use 'it really has lots of trees'. 'There was a a scene like a sea' is ungrammatical; use 'scenes like the sea'. 'Peoples' should be 'people' (uncountable in this sense). The final fragment 'so peoples have a.' is incomplete; complete the idea as 'so people enjoy it' or similar. Suggestion: check singular vs plural nouns, pronoun reference, and avoid sentence fragments.