Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and complete your thought. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, like), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep answers to no more than five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, such as city skylines, botanical gardens, and mountain landscapes. For example, I like capturing sunrise over a mountain because the light brings out the colors, and in cities I focus on architectural details to show contrast. These subjects help me practice composition and improve my photography skills.

Sugerencia: Combine repeated reasons and use linking words to make the answer smoother. Reduce repetition ("It is because") and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., greenery, wildlife). Add a brief example or result to make the answer more specific.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer abundant wildlife and lush greenery, which I find very calming. For instance, walking through a countryside trail listening to birds and seeing deer helps me relax and recharge, so I often visit rural areas at weekends.

Sugerencia: Finish your sentences and avoid vague phrases like "unusual things" or "unreal." Explain specifically what is different and give an example. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas and keep it within three sentences if possible.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often feature landscapes and cultures I can't find at home. For example, I was amazed by the terraced rice fields in Bali, which are very different from the flat farmland back home, so traveling exposes me to unique scenery and new perspectives.

× I love uh, taking pictures of different things.

✓ I love taking pictures of different things.

There is an unnecessary filler 'uh' disrupting fluency. Remove disfluent interjections for written correction; the present participle 'taking' is correct after 'love'. Suggestion: pause briefly instead of saying 'uh' when speaking.

× It is because I.

✓ It is because I enjoy capturing different scenes.

The sentence 'It is because I.' is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object, making it a sentence fragment. Complete the idea by adding what the speaker does or feels (for example, 'enjoy capturing different scenes'). Suggestion: always finish reason clauses with a full clause containing subject and verb.

× It is because I get to see a lot of animals and the beautiful trees.

✓ It is because I get to see many animals and beautiful trees.

Using 'a lot of' is informal; 'many' is more concise. Also 'the beautiful trees' is odd without prior reference—use 'beautiful trees' without 'the'. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable plural nouns and omit 'the' unless referring to specific trees.

× It is because I like seeing greeneries and it it really helps me to calm down.

✓ It is because I like seeing greenery and it really helps me calm down.

'Greeneries' is not a standard plural; the uncountable noun 'greenery' is used to mean plant life. There is a duplicated 'it'. Also 'helps me calm down' is more natural than 'helps me to calm down'. Suggestion: use 'greenery' and avoid word duplication; omit unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' in informal contexts.

× It is because it is unusual things to see when I travel in a different countries.

✓ It is because there are unusual things to see when I travel to different countries.

This sentence has multiple issues: 'it is unusual things' is ungrammatical—use 'there are' with plural 'things' (there be issue). 'in a different countries' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'countries' and wrong preposition—use 'to different countries'. Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence of plural items, drop the article 'a' when followed by plural, and use 'travel to' for destinations.

× I could not see the see those views in my country.

✓ I could not see those views in my country.

The sentence contains a duplicated verb 'see the see' and the definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'those'. Remove repetition and keep the demonstrative 'those'. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words and redundant articles.

× It's unreal and.

✓ It's unreal.

'It's unreal and.' is a sentence fragment ending with a coordinating conjunction without completing the second element. Either finish the second element (for example, 'It's unreal and exciting') or remove 'and'. Suggestion: avoid ending sentences with 'and' unless you add a second clause.