Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid filler words, and limit length to 2–4 sentences. Use correct verb forms and simpler structure: state whether you like taking pictures, give one or two specific reasons or an example, and finish with a brief concluding remark. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to show relationships.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because I think landscapes and city scenes are beautiful and tell stories. For example, when I travel I take a few photos to remember the colours and atmosphere, so I can look back on those moments later.

Sugerencia: Be more direct and correct grammar. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid vague phrases like "it's more entertain" and replace with precise vocabulary such as "relaxing" or "peaceful". Keep to a maximum of four sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and offer natural scenery that is pleasant to photograph. For instance, I enjoy taking pictures of fields, trees and rivers because the colours and light change throughout the day, creating interesting photos.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and tighten language. Start with a clear statement of preference, then give a concise reason with a specific detail (e.g., culture, architecture, new scenery). Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing like "other country countries"; use "other countries". Limit to two or three sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I want to discover different cultures and landscapes. For example, I like seeing unfamiliar architecture and markets when I travel, which gives me fresh inspiration for my photos.

× Umm, Leo sings that.

✓ Umm, Leo sings that.

No grammatical correction needed for this clause itself, but it likely reflects a vocabulary/meaning mistake rather than a grammar error. If the student intended a different meaning (for example, 'I mean that' or 'You know that'), they should replace 'Leo sings that' with the correct phrase. Suggestion: clarify the intended phrase; if the student meant 'I mean that,' use 'I mean that.'

× I don't have the habits to go in my phone and takes photos.

✓ I don't have the habit of going on my phone and taking photos.

Errors: incorrect plural 'habits' (should be 'habit' in this context), incorrect preposition 'in' for using a phone (should be 'on'), and third person singular verb 'takes' used with 'I' (should be 'taking' as part of the gerund phrase). Suggestion: use 'habit' for a general routine, use 'of' after 'habit', use gerund forms 'going' and 'taking' for actions following prepositions.

× So I want it, but I don't do it.

✓ So I want to, but I don't do it.

The original uses 'want it' which is vague and unnatural when referring to an action; 'want to' + verb is the correct structure to express desire to perform an action. Suggestion: use 'want to' followed by the verb (implied 'take photos').

× But yeah, you know, it's about captures the moments to have a remembrance of that in the future.

✓ But yeah, you know, it's about capturing moments to have a reminder of them in the future.

Multiple errors: 'captures' is the wrong verb form after 'about' (use gerund 'capturing'); 'the moments' is unnecessary—use plural 'moments' without 'the' or use 'the moments' only if specific; 'a remembrance' is unnatural in English—use 'a reminder' or 'remembrance' rarely; 'of that' should match plural 'them'. Suggestion: after 'about' use gerund, prefer 'capturing moments' and 'reminder of them'.

× They are all they owns pros and cons.

✓ They each have their own pros and cons.

Errors: 'they are all they owns' is ungrammatical. Use 'each' or 'all' with correct verb and possessive: 'they each have their own'. 'pros and cons' is correct. Suggestion: use 'each have their own' or 'all have their own' followed by 'pros and cons'.

× But I will personally prefer the rural space because it's most it's more I will say entertain to picture nature.

✓ But I would personally prefer rural areas because I find it more enjoyable to take pictures of nature.

Multiple issues: tense/modal use (prefer typically in present/future: 'would prefer' is better for polite preference), 'rural space' unnatural—use 'rural areas', repetition 'it's most it's more' incorrect, 'I will say entertain' is wrong word order and word choice—use 'I find it more enjoyable' and use 'to take pictures of nature' (infinitive). Suggestion: use 'would prefer' for preference, 'find it more enjoyable', and 'take pictures' for photographing.

× This is also a good question because firstly the two are amazing, but because of my personal ambition to go away, to go abroad, I would say that I will prefer the other country countries view because I want to discover the world.

✓ This is also a good question because both are amazing, but because of my personal ambition to go abroad, I would say that I prefer views in other countries because I want to discover the world.

Errors: 'firstly the two are amazing' should be 'both are amazing'; 'go away, to go abroad' is repetitive—use 'go abroad'; mixing 'would say' with 'I will prefer' is awkward—use 'I would say that I prefer' or 'I prefer'; 'other country countries view' is ungrammatical—use 'views in other countries.' Suggestion: simplify phrasing, use 'both', 'go abroad', and consistent modal ('would' or present 'prefer').