Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and specific. Give a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and explain why you enjoy taking photos with one or two supporting details using linking words. Also correct word choice: use 'portray' or 'capture' instead of 'portrait' when describing what photos do.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they allow me to capture the mood of a place. For example, I like photographing sunsets and cityscapes to preserve colors and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and linking words. Start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and examples. Replace vague phrases like 'greenery things' and 'nature wiped' with precise words such as 'green landscapes' and 'surrounded by nature.' Avoid fillers and grammar errors.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy green landscapes and fresh air. For example, I often visit nearby countryside where rolling fields and forests help me relax and take peaceful photographs.

Sugerencia: Be concise and structured. Start with a clear statement of preference, then give two specific supporting details (places, features) linked with conjunctions. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Thank you' at the start and correct grammar (e.g., 'views' plural, 'hill stations').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many diverse attractions. For example, I enjoy visiting the northern hill stations for their cool scenery and Tincha Falls for its dramatic waterfalls and photo opportunities.

× I like to. I like taking pictures of different views because, uh, I like to portrait.

✓ I like to. I like taking pictures of different views because I like to take portraits.

The verb 'portrait' is a noun here; the correct verb form is 'take portraits'. Also 'I like to' is vague but acceptable; removing filler comma and 'uh' clarifies the sentence. Use the infinitive 'to take' after 'like to' when expressing a preference for an action.

× I like to prefer views in rural area because uh, I like to see greenery things and I feel I can feel nature wiped there, which is very freshing and interesting.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like to see green scenery and I feel I can experience nature there, which is very refreshing and interesting.

Use plural 'areas' (singular/plural and preposition choice). 'Like to prefer' is redundant; use 'prefer'. 'Greenery things' is unidiomatic; use 'green scenery' or 'greenery'. 'I feel I can feel' is repetitive; use 'I can experience'. 'Nature wiped' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'be surrounded by nature' or 'experience nature'. 'Freshing' is nonstandard; use 'refreshing'. Removed filler 'uh' and corrected articles and word forms.

× Thank you, I enjoy view in my country because there are many sites in my country.

✓ Thank you. I enjoy the views in my country because there are many sites to see.

Use plural 'views' and the definite article 'the' before 'views' when speaking generally about views in the country. 'Sites in my country' is fine but 'sites to see' is more natural. Also split into two sentences and remove repetition.

× I like to go north in my country which is very interesting view and hill station in my city.

✓ I like to go to the north of my country because it has very interesting views and hill stations near my city.

Use 'go to the north' or 'go north' with 'to' and include 'of' for 'north of my country'. 'Very interesting view' should be plural 'views'. 'Hill station in my city' is awkward; clarify with 'hill stations near my city' or 'a hill station near my city'. Adjust articles and plurals for correctness.

× Uh, there are Tincha Falls also available to view such things.

✓ There is also Tincha Falls to visit.

Reduce filler 'uh'. Use 'There is' for a named waterfall (or 'There are' if treating 'falls' as plural, but commonly 'Tincha Falls' takes singular 'is'). 'Available to view such things' is awkward; use 'to visit' or 'to see'. Simplify structure for natural expression.