Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng nhưng có thể làm phong phú hơn bằng cách thêm một câu chủ đề mạnh mẽ hơn và một ví dụ cụ thể cá nhân. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp ý (memories / remind me) và giữ tối đa 4–5 câu. Hãy dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (for example, moreover, especially).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views, especially when I travel. For example, on a trip to Da Nang last year I photographed the sunrise over the beach and the rugged mountains nearby to capture the contrasts. I focus on unique details like the colours of the sky or local boats to make each photo more memorable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nội dung hợp lý nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và một từ dùng sai ("like fuels"). Cấu trúc câu cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi từ vựng, và có thể thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (for instance, because). Giữ câu ngắn gọn và cụ thể hơn bằng cách nêu một kỷ niệm hoặc lý do cụ thể tại sao bạn thấy thư giãn.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is much quieter and more peaceful. For instance, when I hike in the mountains I can hear birds and flowing rivers, which helps me relax and forget about the noise of the city.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng tốt và cân bằng, nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp ("I find it's beaches" nên sửa). Câu trả lời có thể mạnh hơn nếu thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh ngắn gọn giữa cảnh ở trong nước và nước ngoài. Dùng một linking phrase như "on the other hand" hoặc "for example" để mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer the scenery in my own country because our beaches, rivers and mountains have a unique charm. For example, the limestone karsts and clear rivers at Ninh Binh are unlike anything I saw abroad, though on the other hand I enjoy discovering different landscapes when I travel overseas.

× I often take pictures of landscapes when I travel, especially mountains and beaches to keep them as memories.

✓ I often take pictures of landscapes when I travel, especially of mountains and beaches to keep as memories.

The original sentence omits the preposition 'of' after 'especially' when listing examples; this causes a slight pronoun/phrase misuse. Adding 'of' clarifies that mountains and beaches are examples of landscapes to keep as memories. Suggestion: include necessary prepositions when making example lists: 'especially of X and Y'.

× I also try to capture interesting details like sunrise or local scenery to remind me of the place.

✓ I also try to capture interesting details, like the sunrise or local scenery, to remind me of the place.

When mentioning specific things such as 'sunrise', the definite article 'the' is normally required. Also adding commas helps separate the clause. Suggestion: use 'the sunrise' and commas when listing examples for clarity.

× I prefer rural views to urban ones because countryside like fuels, much quieter and more peaceful.

✓ I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is much quieter and more peaceful.

The original sentence has structural errors: missing article 'the', an incorrect word 'fuels' likely a typo, and missing verb 'is'. Correct structure requires 'the countryside is much quieter and more peaceful.' Suggestion: ensure subject, verb, and articles are present and remove accidental words.

× For example, mountains and rivers help me relax and there is less noise and population than cities.

✓ For example, mountains and rivers help me relax, and there is less noise and fewer people than in cities.

'Population' is not the correct quantifier here; we use 'people' or 'population' with different structures. Also 'fewer' is used with countable nouns (people). Adding 'in' before 'cities' makes the comparison clear. Suggestion: use 'fewer people' and include 'in' for clarity.

× I prefer the views in my country because I find it's beaches, rivers, and mountains exceptionally beautiful.

✓ I prefer the views in my country because I find its beaches, rivers, and mountains exceptionally beautiful.

The contraction 'it's' means 'it is' or 'it has' and is incorrect for the possessive form. Use the possessive adjective 'its' to indicate ownership. Suggestion: use 'its' for possessive pronouns.

× However, I also enjoy visiting other countries and always try to appreciate and respect their landscapes when I travel.

✓ However, I also enjoy visiting other countries and always try to appreciate and respect their landscapes when I travel.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. It correctly uses plural pronoun 'their' to refer to 'other countries' and maintains consistent verb forms. No revision necessary.